These are the facts of Mark Barton’s shooting spree at the Security building in Atlanta, Georgia.I sat in front of my TV in total shock as this eposide played itself out, then wrote this poem. The end came at the BP station near where I lived. My son had just been there to gas up his car.

At two-fifty PM in Buckhead today,
In the Security building where stocks are played.
With dead calm unfeeling eyes,
He took innocent people by surprise.
He shot them down one by one.
Where fortunes are lost and fortunes are won.

While four lay dying from their wounds,
He ran to building number two.
It was five there who cruelly died,
While many were wounded tho left alive.
Mark Barton was that mad mans name
So much evil in that distorted brain

Now a startling new discovery is made
In Henry county his family lay dead
Two children and step mother at home in their beds
And these were not the first of the crimes
Hatched in that evil tormented mind

At Wiess Lake in ninety-three,
His wife and her mother were brutally slain,
Tho Barton was never officially blamed.
Blunt force and hacked with hatchet or knife.
His girl friend gave him an alibi.
Now she is the present wife to die.

Terrified people have now left the scene,
Only the dead in the buildings remain.
Surrounding counties have answered the call.
All streets are covered and all the roads.
No one has a clue where Barton will go.
Five long hours have taken their toll.

Now spotted on I- Seventy-Five,
They have called for help to take him alive.
But at BP station on ninety-two
Pulled over in his Green Arrow Star van,
He placed his weapon against his head.
Mark Barton has calmly shot himself dead.

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  • Terri Hall on May 31, 2007

    I watched this on TV. I couldn’t bring myself to go to bed untill the end. I like this poem. I will copy and keep it in my journal.

  • Patricia Williams on May 31, 2007

    I like this poem. You have recorded it just as I remember it.

  • Ed on Jun 1, 2007

    How clearly you have distilled this sad tale for us.

  • Hannah on Jun 2, 2007

    This is a true picture of the killings.I like the way you have written it.

  • Harold on Jun 9, 2007

    Thank you for the story of this horrible crime.

  • Nancy on Jul 21, 2007

    It is a very accurant account of the whole thing.

  • Patricia Cunningham on Sep 4, 2007

    This was a very accurate account of the crime. I love the way you have written it.

  • Judy Sheldon on Oct 22, 2007

    Very well written. You have a talent for poetry, you also have something in common with both my mother, Ruby and daughter by the same name – a great name. LOL

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 19, 2007

    Thanks to you all for your kind comments, and Judy what a pleasure to share a name with your mother and your daughter too.

  • Amos on Jul 5, 2008

    Ruby, You tell a whale of a good story. This is factual and well put together.

  • Devin on Jul 10, 2008

    This poem made me cry. I was the children’s babysitter and Leah Ann’s coworker. I’m going to put this poem in the scrapbook that i put together with all of the other newpaper stories.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 19, 2008

    Thank you all so much for your interest, and Devin, I am so sorry about what happened. I can only imagine such a tragedy happening to a family close to you. I’m glad you liked the poem. I tried to be perfectly accurate. I wish you well. Ruby

  • mind1 on Aug 6, 2008

    Hey, I remember this happening in Atlanta, Ga.

  • goodselfme on Nov 26, 2008

    What a nice tribute to a very sad situation. You are so kind even through your writing that comes across so well .I am reading past posts of favorites.

  • David Crerand on Jul 28, 2009

    your article caught and relayed the events of the day but your poem gives it the emotional impact. Interesting to see the same material treated twice by the same author in such diverse methods. Very moving.

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