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Marriage (Senryu Series)

Priyanka Bhowmick on Dec 13, 2009
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Senryu (humor) series on marriage.

marriage, a chain bound,
in the hands of the victim,
bear the sweet torture.
~~~
relations change taste,
before marriage, add soda,
later becomes raw.

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  • Pinaki Ghosh on Dec 13, 2009

    so true, priyanka

  • cutedrishti8 on Dec 13, 2009

    Thanks for sharing this short and wonderful piece…

  • Aiyanna on Dec 13, 2009

    Very true!!!

  • deep blue on Dec 13, 2009

    Another masterpiece.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 13, 2009

    :)

  • metro7 on Dec 14, 2009

    How true ha ha thxs

  • Sunitha Stalin on Dec 14, 2009

    ha ha good one

  • Nina007 on Dec 14, 2009

    don’t u think victim is a harsh word to use here in such relationships u have used it in loverboy too. just an opinion am not an expert or something but the word victim makes the poem very sad n dark..

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