Some people need to just stop pretending; admit they are weak, lazy and irresponsible. Stop the pretense of being strong, caring and decisive leaders, be it on the job or in the homes.

Feigned loyalty

Counterfeit authority

Fabricated honesty

Masquerading as the man

You’d like to be

Until faced with a challenge

The simplest decision

You crumble under the weight

Of responsibility

Revealing the boy you are

 

Imagined grandeur

A veil of concern

The constant posturing

Of some devised position

Putting on the disguise of

A dedicated leader

Yet unwilling to venture

To places you are

Unhesitant to send others

 

How long will this sham continue?

 

 

©2011 – Andrea J. Shannon

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  • Roe2115 on Mar 9, 2011

    The constant posturing, of some devised position. I love this.

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 9, 2011

    I think there are a lot of people being described in your poem. I suppose they want to cover up their inadequacies. A well expressed poem.

  • Eldridge on Mar 9, 2011

    Great work

  • buenavida on Mar 9, 2011

    If we are humble enough to admit our limits, we might learn a lot..!:))

  • Minaem on Mar 9, 2011

    Great read.

  • Wizard Brown on Mar 9, 2011

    Well written. Many people cover up the real them. It happens all over the world every day

  • mikailahmayhem69 on Mar 9, 2011

    thanks for sharing :)

  • gaby7 on Mar 10, 2011

    A vivid description of a masqueraed! They are usually good-for nothing kind of folks! Thanks for sharing!-

  • T. S. Lewis on Mar 10, 2011

    Christine summed it up well. Seems like maturity is hard to come by nowadays.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 10, 2011

    Hehehehe, somebody is making you angry, I just hope it isn’t me!

  • FX777222999 on Mar 11, 2011

    Nice construction of thoughts.

  • happydoodlegirl on Mar 14, 2011

    very well written, your poetry is refreshing. Keep up the good work!

  • Phoenix Montoya on Mar 16, 2011

    Well a lot of people cover up, its really annoying when you know what’s their capability and they are just being lazy. Good one.

  • CA Johnson on Mar 21, 2011

    Your poem was amazing. I do know quite a few people who masquerade like this too.

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