Realizing the giving and receiving of gifts at Christmas, is not what it is all about. I am, however, human.

I thought of you when I was a child,
every waking hour,
you had my attention totally,
you were the ultimate power.
I went to church to pray for you,
and in my childish way,
I believed you would be there,
and come to me one day.
As I grew a little more,
I believed, but had a little doubt,
yet still I prayed that you were real,
and left my stocking out.
Yes I prayed for Santa Claus,
to come into my home,
hoping for Christmas gifts,
that would prove I was not alone.
As the years have aged me,
and love has come my way,
I no longer need dear Santa Claus
but still I try and pray.
I pray for Peace on Earth,
and for the love of man,
I try and help all others,
doing the best I can.
I pray that others,
will try and do the same,
I am still a little naughty tho’
and hopes a gift bears my name.

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  • sue mcverry on Dec 18, 2008

    Lovely. I hope a gift does bear your name. Have a lovely Christmas.

  • Debra. on Dec 18, 2008

    Very well written, Glynis. I hope you get all the gifts you want and some. God bless, friend.

  • Unofre Pilio on Dec 18, 2008

    Yes, a very lovely piece.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 18, 2008

    This is lovely Glynis. A perfect poem for Christmas to remind us what Christmas is really about. Great work

  • Jeoffrey Meister on Dec 18, 2008

    Very nice, Glynis. Kind of puts that child back in Christmas.

  • PR Mace on Dec 18, 2008

    Such a sweet poem. It reminds me of myself as a child. I was sure one Christmas Eve I saw Santa looking in my window. I quickly closed my eyes. I have tried this year to make Christmas more for my granddaughters but I too hope for a gift with my name on it. I hope Santa leaves you one as well. May you be blessed, my friend.

    Always your friend, Pam

  • papaleng on Dec 18, 2008

    a fantastic write, hope you receive each and every gift this Christmas. wish you too spend more time with your love ones in this special occasion.

  • Carolyn Ann Aish on Dec 18, 2008

    Love the rhyming words in this! You’ve invoked strong memories in me —I was devastated as a child, to learn the ‘Santa lie’ — I couldn’t believe for a long time that he wasn’t real – how hard it is for children to really believe in something and then, as for me, be mocked and joked at because you still want to believe. I’m glad though that I ‘grew up’ and now have an Eternal Hope and Faith in God who to me, is all He ever said He was and forevermore will be to me. Christmas Blessings, Glynis and great success in the New Year!!!

  • Glynis Smy on Dec 18, 2008

    Thanks my friends x

  • Lisa Clayton Williams on Dec 18, 2008

    Loved this!

  • Mr Cool on Dec 18, 2008

    Carolyn Ann Aish are you trying to say tha…that Sanata isn’t real?

    It’s a great poem and induces guilt that you do care too much about the material side of Christmas. It reminds me of a couple of years ago when the rest of the class tried to tell me Santa wasn’t real so I tried to prove them wrong.

  • Johaubannah on Dec 18, 2008

    Excwllwnt writing as always.

  • Michele Cameron Drew on Dec 18, 2008

    Very nice, Glynis. Peace on Earth and goodwill toward men. BTW, love Mr Cool’s comment :)

    -M

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 18, 2008

    Very nice Glynis, It’s good to see you back.

  • goodselfme on Dec 18, 2008

    I pray for these for you as well. Merry Christmas!Nicely written with a smooth style like you do so well.

  • Inna Tysoe on Dec 18, 2008

    That’s lovely. A Merry Christmas to you and yours!

    Inna

  • R J Evans on Dec 19, 2008

    Lovely poem!

  • Gordon G on Dec 19, 2008

    Very nice poem Glynis.

  • Glynis Smy on Dec 21, 2008

    Drew,re – the sword and the death of Jesus, I am happy you noted the error in your 56 stanza and will correct it, I was hoping that the perfectionist in you would appreciate it. It is the one lesson that always stuck in my mind when I was taught it years ago.

    The reason I removed our comments are that they caused offence to some of my family who, I am proud to say, take their religious views a little more seriously than, I am ashamed to say,me. They read my works and I am not one to hurt others if I can help it, certainly not my family and made a decision to remove our ‘banter’.

    Yes, I noted you turned me into a bad person, I am not completely blind to some of your ‘clever’ ways. So you live in ‘bad person land’, yup, suits you ;)

    I was away during the sad riots in Greece, and I have not heard much about them here in Cyprus,I will be having coffee with village friends soon and they will no doubt be discussing it and I will hear many versions of the truth,therefore,I am unable to enlighten you through a first person perspective,sorry.
    By the way, when are you going to start writing on Triond again? You never know, I might become a fan :0
    I will confess my ignorance here…symo? Was this reference to my carrying a cross or a mistake on my surname Smy?

  • Matt H on Dec 21, 2008

    Thanks for writing this! Great work!

    -Matt

  • Lauren Axelrod on Dec 21, 2008

    I think this is wonderful and heartfelt and Gylnis, I am having the same problem with a troll that just won\’t reveal their name. Such a shame to have to hide in the dark.

  • Glynis Smy on Dec 23, 2008

    Drew, if you tried following the rules we would not have to say goodbye. You are, I have noticed, a highly educated person who loves a debate. You are a fighter for the written word and want to see it perfected. You do, however, try to teach in an aggressive manner in public, I write to the person in private, it does not matter that the world sees a polite message from me, they do not matter, what matters is the person I am supporting.I have friends here, who cannot write in perfect English, but they, like us, write from the heart. Yes Drew, I have read your work,(before you removed it),I did not however, have the courage to leave a comment, you bite back at those who do and want to start a debate, maybe this is your forte. I think it is sad that you have not used your teaching skills here, you would be a valuable asset, but only if you were a little kinder when you shoot us down ;) Triond,in your opinion, have extraordinary rules, they are rules that protect the writer though Drew, and you have to accept them if you want to be part of the community. I know you have lit a spark amongst some of us, and once I got over your attacks, I realised we have something in common, we both love writing, I do it with inperfections and you do it well, the only difference lies with our characters, you are …mmm Goliath? ;) Oh before you go, please leave a comment on ‘My Grandfather Gave Me a Gift’ thanks and good luck for 2009.

  • Lauren Axelrod on Dec 23, 2008

    Aww Glynis, it’s like a legacy is ending. This was a wonderful piece once again. I had a situation like this as well but, we both figured it was ridiculous and stopped writing comments to each other.

  • Glynis Smy on Dec 23, 2008

    The sad part is I will miss reading Drew’s clever twists, but not the horrible bits ;)

  • Glynis Smy on Dec 23, 2008

    For those of you who are confused, Triond, with my consent, deleted Drew’s comment, it was a copy of a private message from and to them and not relevant to this work. I have chosen to leave my response and have not been asked to remove it as I feel it paves the way for others to think before they bite. I would appreciate all comments here now, relate to my work, any personal views about Drew can be sent to my message box. Thank you.

  • Drew Diliigents on Dec 23, 2008

    Criticism may not be agreeable, but it is necessary. It fulfills the same function as pain in the human body. It calls attention to an unhealthy state of things.

    -Winston Churchill-

    Need I say more.

    Time;

    to die

    .

  • Bob on Dec 23, 2008

    I love this dude so much I’d go gay for him…

  • Glynis Smy on Dec 23, 2008

    This page is mourning the loss of a ‘friend’ Drew and celebrating the coming out of Bob!!

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