Matrimonial Piece

2tet on Feb 27, 2009

Two genes now compose a lipid, in hopes of building another life’s feed.

Bounded for a Lifetime
It’s a fairy tale’s bail climb
Imagine the magic of lime
Tossed on a straight line

Oration that lasts for an hour
Tied two hearts on a jar
Envisioned to hamper mar
For a daily fulfilling tar

Feels opposite of coffin
When your dream buffed in
Comedienne lose its laughing
It’s cooled by lover’s coughing

Kisses so vivid
Hugs gorgeously timid
Two genes now compose a lipid
Hopes to build another life’s feed

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Comments (12)

Peter Cimino on Feb 27, 2009
nicel done.
Carolyn Ann Aish on Feb 27, 2009
Deeply engaging. I’m glad that marriage is more than just reproduction… the joy and close friendship I had with my husband for 36 years was beyond description. Two children, a boy and a girl, were just part of the joy of being half of each other. Thanks for sharing and stirring good memories in me.
Kate Smedley on Feb 27, 2009
I like the unusual rhymes in this poem!
CutestPrincess on Feb 27, 2009
i love the way you played with words…
Ben donovan on Feb 27, 2009
Creatively done, arrousing intro and ending
Joshua Miguel on Feb 27, 2009
i agree with the above comments, its creatively done. nice post.
denus on Feb 27, 2009
very nice,

cheers.
Lee Altman on Feb 27, 2009
nicely written
Vikram Chhabra on Feb 27, 2009
well done!
Anne McNew on Feb 28, 2009
creatively done!
2tet on Feb 28, 2009
Comments are raining… I love it… Thanks for the appreciation. It challenges me to do best…
LOVELYHONEY on Mar 24, 2009
When u say comments are raining,
I see genes in that rain.
When male and female marry,
There is a combination of a y and x,
And or an x with another x,
And that produces the lipid as per you.

What happens when nowadays?
X marries another x,
And a y marries a similar one too,
How you the future population,
Then expect to pursue.
Will you kindly,
Your kind view review…

Hi there!