The beauty of a mature relationship is a comfortable kind of loving.

A warm rain now cools a warmer day
As we lie together at our private pool side
Suites long ago discarded
The rain now washing our nude bodies

Like soft fingers on our skin it is
Sensation only soft falling rain can bring
Our mouths wide open too to drink it in
This is the glory of a rainy summer’s eve

I reach now to your well washed body
Adding ten more soft fingers on your skin
I see you shudder in delight as I touch you
Breasts and nipples lifted upward proud

Now rain is nice for certain things
It has clearly set a most erotic tone
You have rolled now into my waiting arms
Our lips have met in most tender kiss

When younger we’d have stayed right there
And made passionate love in that warm rain
But now the warm and dry inside appeals more
So, smiling, hand in hand, that’s where we go

With soft towels we dry each other’s bodies
Hands now quite experienced at that task
Adding still more to our mutual excitement
But we know too there is no need to rush

Though summer still I have lit a fire
And stacked pillows in places tried before
We sip brandy as we speak our words of love
We will make love when the proper time has come

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  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 22, 2009

    Beautifully written and so romantic.

    Christine

  • Darla Smith on Nov 22, 2009

    Very sensual and romantic.

  • Phantom Beauty on Nov 24, 2009

    When is the proper time to make love? Isnt it always? Well, especially after fighting I heard theres good sex afterwards. So dont drink rain in real life because of the air pollution, remember?

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