Oh, oh, oh…. (^_^)

May there be light

wherever you go

North South East West

You go where I follow

Anywhere you head

Smiles you shall hold

Reasons is so clear

And you sure know

I am always there

To check you hot or cold

Whether day or night

Happy or in sorrow

When your light is out

Please have me told

I will get you batteries

Your light again shall glow

My love is always strong

So genuine, not just for show

If one day, you ever get tired

Remove batteries, and I shall go

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  • FX777222999 on Oct 26, 2011

    Good invention during the night or going in a dark room.

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 26, 2011

    Oh, I want a pair of those for my little grandson. Where did you find them, Star. Amazing work.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Oct 26, 2011

    Sweet poem and cool pics Star.

  • megamatt09 on Oct 26, 2011

    Rather nice.

  • Michal Dorcak on Oct 26, 2011

    Haha, looks like a very good invention. Good writing too :)

  • CA Johnson on Oct 26, 2011

    I loved your poem. I also loved the pictures. The slippers are so cute.

  • LCM Linda on Oct 26, 2011

    Star, lovely poem. The slippers are very interesting. They will serve as a wonderful Christmas present.

  • Eunice Tan on Oct 26, 2011

    So sweet… and innovative. There is glasses with lamp too.

  • Lady Sunshine on Oct 27, 2011

    LOL. I’m laughing so hard! How cute. :D

  • Sharif Ishnin on Oct 27, 2011

    I want one of that! :)

  • Sunjhini on Oct 28, 2011

    wonderful write.

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 28, 2011

    that’s so neat, I want a pair.

  • PR Mace on Oct 31, 2011

    I need a pair of those for Christmas.

  • wonder on Nov 1, 2011

    My eyes lit up at your poem, but my poor feet—still dark, send me a pair.

  • Likha on Nov 1, 2011

    I have seen some children wearing this pair of shoes. Fun to look at them.

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