When are you going to learn? When are you going to learn that when it rains, it pours? When are you going to learn that we didn’t vote for scandals, or for naked shots. We voted for you.

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Father, it’s time I do a little review

The hatred in my actions was not addressed at you

Consider this the beginning of the project to save my soul

Salvation and happiness can be our only goal

Suffer in Silence

Tell me brother, were we meant to suffer in silence?

30 million black people in the hood plagued by violence

Yeah maybe plagued by violence but destroyed by addiction

Kanye like sellin’ rap is America’s only dark diction

Last year Budweiser sold about six billion bottles

And no, we drank that addiction – Lil’ Wayne forget the models

Sixty million, damn that’s a lot of stuff to push around town.

More than enough liquor to take New Orleans down

See people just hungry – thing is they fallin down

The paster, the priest – they right to be angry an’ frown.

People sayin’ its our fault just so they can let us drown

All those at the top would rather just laugh it off

I wish they’d lend a hand instead of just jackin off

There’s something seriously wrong with these newspaper pictures

If people in Louisiana can die while Lou Dobbs lectures

Drowning scares me more than anything man

Imagine swimming away, doin’ everything you can

Yo city’s under water, but this hood ain’t atlantis

But the ends the same, people dead – the government a praying mantis

Or some other kind of insect, maybe a cockroach

No reparations, we only askin’ for a little reproach

Some kind of punishment as little boys and girls

Die in FEMA trailers, sick off the chemicals

And Spike Lee, like always brother we agree on this

This Katrina stuff, yeah holla man, it’s bull

But don’t walk away from me without hearing the following words

Katrina is only the tip of the iceberg

Maybe it takes a city to call to your attention

That like I said before, we the people need intervention

Intervention baby, and I’m not just talkin’ divine

Although it would be nice if those Congressmen actually worked in summertime

Lack of responsibility by those in power

We didn’t vote ‘em in for no scandals in the shower

Shower, bathroom, wide stance whatever

It’s about damn time the people rose up and stood together

I’m calling for an insurrection. The never is now.

A new face in the game, I’m just getting started in.

Get my folks out the hood like I’m Brooka T. Washington

Push more packs than that OG Denzela Washington

Deliver more speeches than a brother named Martin

Maybe I’ll have my own march on Washington

This nation is broken so it’s time to start again

Like Barack, get elected and make us less partisan

Poetry painted like I’m some kinda medieval French artisan.

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  • Daisy Peasblossom on Mar 30, 2009

    Not completely sure where you are going with this one. Katrina? Shameful tragedy. Bushy baby sure ate that one! (I didn’t vote for him.) Political scandals. Politicians are humans. Humans error. (Are an error?) Feed the people? Yes, please. Too many starving children everywhere of every color. Did I get or miss the message?

  • Elizabeth Abbott on Mar 30, 2009

    Very descriptive, indepth, and huge in content.

  • macon on Mar 30, 2009

    this poem conveys a strong message. you have a keen view for political issues underlying current events. good work!

  • clay hurtubise on Mar 30, 2009

    Strong piece. If people want to be heard, they have to speak up to the correct ear. Shouting at each other accomplishes little.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • manya on Mar 30, 2009

    I can completely relate to the sentiment reflected in your piece. Though I live in a different country, the basic problems, apathy and indifference remains the same. And yes, the “never is now” for certain or else we are doomed to hand our heads in shame in front of our children.

    -Manya

  • Uma Shankari on Mar 30, 2009

    I could say, ditto manya. Powerful writing, strongly expressed anguish.

  • Poetic Enigma on Mar 30, 2009

    Great sentiment shows through your words, a great depth to this piece
    very well done

  • Antonette Ramos on Mar 30, 2009

    this is a very powerful piece of work… i like it.. well done!

    :-)

  • topelectrician on Mar 30, 2009

    that was a lot of fack driven poetry!…good read!

  • amilia snow on Mar 31, 2009

    I’m not sure whether I got all of it. But I do agree that we people need intervention, not only the divine, but those we voted on, the government, the leaders, the people we elected to change our country.

    They had better start pulling together instead of shouting at each other during assembly like some 3 yr old kids. The nation is at risk, they had better do stg now or lose it forever.

  • OhSugar on Mar 31, 2009

    Very interest read. I like the fact that you have a strong conviction about the need for change, and your desire to step up to the plate against the deprivation of the needy. Great article for discussion.

  • vevel on Apr 1, 2009

    Young and aware!!!!
    It was a pleasure to read.
    Only if their were more like you.
    What a better place the world would be.

  • Alicia Wind on Apr 2, 2009

    I liked the way you portrayed it, thought provoking piece. Anyone can appreciate the thought of this poem….

  • Lliam King on Apr 3, 2009

    I am in agreement withe your style. Your pics appear natural. i rather enjoy your work. Lliam

  • Dianneapril on Apr 3, 2009

    Great writing!

  • Juhls on Apr 6, 2009

    Very strong, powerful piece.

    Have enjoyed reading your stuff! Thank you for all your comments on my articles.

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