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Maybe Some Day; Time Will Tell

Darla Cooke on Oct 30, 2009
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Acrostic poem.

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Maybe some day: time will tell

All our dreams will come true

You will return back home to me

Before long my wish will be granted

Eager to see your handsome face

 

Sensual delight we’ll share together

Overcome by our raging passion

Making love throughout the night

Engaging in our wildest fantasies

 

Dreaming of when I’m in your arms

Attracted by your sexy brown eyes

You entice me with your charming grin

 

Tempted by your tender caress

I need to feel your delicate kiss

Memories we will make together

Eternal devotion between you and I

 

Waking up in your warm embrace

I yearn to feel your loving touch

Longing to hold you close at night

Listening to your whispered words

 

Tempted by my erotic dreams

Eager to be with you once more

Lying naked on the waterbed

Longing for the day you return

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  • ken bultman on Oct 30, 2009

    Another well done acrostic.

  • Walter Holstad on Oct 30, 2009

    nice one

  • diamondpoet on Oct 30, 2009

    That was pretty steamy. Nice write.

  • alc on Oct 30, 2009

    Another wonderful write! Thanks for the share!

  • N. Lloyd Andrews on Oct 30, 2009

    Time and again I have stated in different places that I’m not big on reading or writing poetry.

    That is quickly changing, in part, thanks to your poems and in part thanks to many of the other writers here on Triond.

    Keep it up.

  • Judi Eddy on Oct 30, 2009

    Very Raunchy, Loved it

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 30, 2009

    A great one to read….Liked it

  • Linda Lori on Oct 30, 2009

    Passionate…!

  • cardy on Oct 30, 2009

    Oh I do like you’re work this was lovely thanks for the share

  • Nikita K on Oct 30, 2009

    It’s been a long time since I’ve read one of your poems Darla and I can confirm that you haven’t lost your flair! Beautiful language wrapped in one of my favourite styles (the acrostic one) – a marraige made in heaven!

  • Goodselfme on Oct 30, 2009

    So brightly and vividly penned.

  • Tanya Wallace on Oct 30, 2009

    Lovely writr Darla.Your fab at these poems!

  • ajmera on Oct 30, 2009

    Wonderful darla…Gr8 piece again

  • Brenda Nelson on Oct 30, 2009

    I havent written one of those types of poems, they look fun.

  • lillyrose on Oct 31, 2009

    awww that was a great write!

  • PhoenixRox on Oct 31, 2009

    Niiice poem. Very passionate!! I just added you as a friend. Hope you can check my work sometime :)

  • deep blue on Oct 31, 2009

    Well done poetry.

  • CA Johnson on Nov 1, 2009

    I loved it! I always enjoy reading your acrostic poems. You really can write a beautiful poem with any title that you use.

  • AlmaG on Nov 2, 2009

    Fantastic poem.. so flawless… and you can feel the intense emotion within it… ^_^

  • STEVE666 on Nov 2, 2009

    Great acrostic poem, Darla.

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