This is dedicated to my two friends, who have fallen in love with each other, and it took them so long to discover this.

I look over to see my friend,

glancing towards the other end,

where the one special man in her life

sits and looks straight back at her.

She blushes with happiness,

that at least he knows,

she exists and likes her so.

Those two great friends,

with great discussions that never end

happened to glance at one another,

realizing “That’s the one”

He walks away,

not knowing what to say,

wanting to make her laugh,

yet no idea how to make her say

“i like you for who you are to me”

Ignoring her,

instead of trying,

gave a mixed signal to that one girl.

She brushed away the tears,

and tried to move on.

Later to find out

how really she was so wrong.

These two friends,

so great of mine,

fell in love,

one very cold night.

And here i am, so happy for them,

that they found the right one

right in each other;

the happiness will never end.

5
Liked it
Comments (4)
  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Dec 19, 2009

    Oh giraffeyyLUV24, what a beautiful story you have penned her in poetic form. I am telling you that your pen is magical and much appreciated. Thank You once again for sharing your wonderful gift…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • Joie Schmidt on Dec 19, 2009

    So lovely – - you will find true love also!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Liz Sapphire on Dec 22, 2009

    :’( Wow that was wonderful poetry there, friend. I hope you will someday find true love for the heat <3 Best wishes ~Liz

  • Olive B. on Jun 12, 2010

    Interesting….nice descriptions. You should write more!!

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading