If love were water, you would be my flow. I’d seek you out just to quench my thirst…

Taking it away

 only makes

 my willingness

 to find it

  even stronger

Replacing it

 solidifies that there’ll

 never be another

Lies make truth

 more creditable

 and though

I’ve got every fact

 there still

 seems to be

 something 

 else missing

I ask questions

 to answers that I’ve

 already conceived

You and I

 apart constitutes

 living in deception

I try to live right

 but can’t hide

 the hollowness

 inside

I need you

 just to survive

If you ever leave,

 then its hide

 and seek 

 because my love

 is like water,

 it will flow

 until it attains

 you as its level

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  • ashan1614 on Oct 25, 2011

    Beautiful! Love IS like water; we need it to live.

  • Lady Sunshine on Oct 26, 2011

    Nicely done. You can’t grab water with your bare hands, but it can drown you – just like love.

  • erwinkennythomas on Oct 26, 2011

    some remarkable verses!

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