Mechanical Love

vladimire popovski on Jan 8, 2012

Tags: Rack and pinion, Spark plug, Turbocharger

The author used different mechanical parts to describe how he’s sweetheart means to him. This may sound alien to those of you who are not familiar with the different mechanical parts of an automobile but there is more to this poem than just spare parts, read on and enjoy.

You are the valve

That injects meaning in my life

You are the piston

That pushes me forward

And calms me down

You are the flywheel

That makes my world

Go round and round

You are the spark plug

That ignites my burning desires

You are the rack and pinion

That guides me

From left to right

You are my radiator

That cools me down

When I am mad

You are the turbo charger

That boosts up my day

Even if we are far away

You are the dashboard

That dictates every

Move that I make

Lastly, you are the key

That started it all.

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Comments (45)

juliachild on Jan 9, 2012
Good share.
vladimire popovski on Jan 11, 2012
Im glad you liked it.
erwinkennythomas on Jan 11, 2012
imaginative
LCM Linda on Jan 11, 2012
Pity that I am not familiar with car, but the poem sounds interesting. An enjoyable read.
ittech on Jan 11, 2012
TX 2 share
morningstar1 on Jan 11, 2012
nice, how did you get the inspiration…:)
ogee77 on Jan 12, 2012
Quite amazing the way you have written!
ittech on Jan 12, 2012
Very good advice.
Francois Hagnere on Jan 12, 2012
Very amazing poem. Thank you.
pruelpo on Jan 12, 2012
Awesome descriptions. I love this…
bolive on Jan 12, 2012
great sharing!
realityspeaks on Jan 13, 2012
Awesome share.
ittech on Jan 16, 2012
thanks for the advice.
Yvhes P. on Jan 17, 2012
very nice share, thanks!
Moses Ingram on Jan 17, 2012
A good share.
ittech on Jan 17, 2012
thanks for share
Eunike on Jan 17, 2012
I must admit that this poem is amazing
juliachild on Jan 18, 2012
very nice
LadyElena on Jan 20, 2012
That’s so sweet.
Thanks.
ittech on Jan 21, 2012
Very well presented.
girishpuri on Jan 22, 2012
i like it
Nidhi Rai on Jan 25, 2012
Very nice.
sheilanewton on Jan 25, 2012
Awesome – and quite unique Vladimir. I like the way you describe the woman’s beauty from the point of view of a car. WOW! Sensational.
Kristie Claar on Jan 25, 2012
Awesome work! Sounds like something my husband would write.
Angelji on Jan 25, 2012
You are the brake that made me stop in your post ! beautiful creative poem…Thanks for being a fan !
ittech on Jan 25, 2012
Very well done.
Lady Sunshine on Jan 25, 2012
Creative use of mechanical car parts as metaphors that describe your sweetheart. And thanks for your comment.
Eunike on Jan 26, 2012
Second visit
mdrkarim7 on Jan 26, 2012
Lastly, you are the key

That started it all.

Good lines.
indianwriting on Jan 26, 2012
aha!!! well written
aheed411 on Jan 26, 2012
Great work
zulfikar on Jan 26, 2012
what a nice way to compare. i think this is an example of creativity. nice to know friends who think differently.
MJRapp on Jan 26, 2012
Wow, that was pretty clever. Nice job!
Nidhi Rai on Jan 26, 2012
Good work.
touchmenot on Jan 26, 2012
OKEY! THIS POEM DRIVES ME CRAZY.. HAHAHAHAHA
lyan08 on Jan 26, 2012
nice
Dora77 on Jan 27, 2012
i lovd it…..good share for the day.
Jsqc Writer on Jan 28, 2012
A creatively fascinating poem!
sheilanewton on Jan 30, 2012
Just had to call in again and ‘like’ this. amazing.
Tulan on Feb 1, 2012
Oh, that’s sweet. She must be quiet a girl.
juliachild on Feb 8, 2012
nice share
ittech on Feb 14, 2012
fabulous
ittech on Feb 17, 2012
A pretty good and informative article.
lonelyplanet on Feb 18, 2012
Awesome work! Sounds like something my husband would write.
Tiki33 on Mar 7, 2012
What a beautiful share. I really enjoyed this.
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