Afternoon of sensual fun.

 

While our spouses are away,

we agree to secretly meet.

I hug you for the very first time,

we kiss with unbridled passion.

We check in at an out-of-town motel,

both of us excited but slightly nervous.

We are ready for an afternoon of fun, 

we undress and shower together.

Your touch feels so delicately soft,

as you rub soap over my naked body.

You wash my skin very tenderly,

further stimulating my raging desire.

Once our sensual shower is over,

we engage in heated lovemaking.

The pleasure and enjoyment we feel,

leads to a wild and shuddering release.

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  • Hollywood James on Aug 14, 2009

    Great piece Darla,

    What time is check-in???…I’ll bring the soap…LOL

  • Ramalingam on Aug 14, 2009

    Erotic.

  • Theresa Johnson on Aug 14, 2009

    very sensual and erotic. i like it. you naughty girl..lol.. great poem darla

  • CA Johnson on Aug 14, 2009

    Great job! It was a very passionate poem Darla and I really enjoyed reading it.

  • Emma Green on Aug 14, 2009

    This poem is full of such passion, i love it and influences me to write more eroctic poetry!!!!!!!!

  • ken bultman on Aug 14, 2009

    Guess what the spouses are doing!

  • Tanya Wallace on Aug 14, 2009

    Excellent work!Very seductive, passionate and creative!

  • Collette Edwards on Aug 15, 2009

    nice piece of raw passion well done, and done with good taste, keep writting :)

  • CutestPrincess on Aug 18, 2009

    full of passion, love it…

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