Melting Away.

Melting Away

I lay on the floor

my soul dissolving and melting from me.

A pressure is pushing onto my heart,

I can’t move, breathe or see.

How can I become muscle and bones?

So I can stop the seepage of life,

the tears and the moans.

The sadness overpowers me

and kidnaps my mind.

The weakness of my pathetic

being is cruel and unkind.

I’m oozing away as each minute goes by

Drowning in sadness,

I gasp for air and I cry.

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Comments (16)
  • ravitej on May 9, 2011

    cool poem.

  • Dreamy777 on May 9, 2011

    nice one

  • zulfikar on May 9, 2011

    interesting imagination

  • prasul on May 9, 2011

    Its painful :) Good writings

  • mona rastogi on May 9, 2011

    good one

  • fat4lity on May 9, 2011

    nice post thank for share :)

  • Cassle Tang on May 9, 2011

    Wow, your poem really suits the sketch well, I do wonder whether it’s your sketch? :)

  • Muhammad Fajar Marthias on May 9, 2011

    Good work.

  • fat4lity on May 9, 2011

    great post thank for share :)

  • Ambi2010 on May 9, 2011

    nice post.

  • adicodrean1967 on May 9, 2011

    very nice post

  • nabdsn on May 10, 2011

    NICE.

  • CHIPMUNK on May 10, 2011

    nice poem

  • Olive Gardener on May 12, 2011

    Is it sad that I can relate to this?

  • neopisiva on May 13, 2011

    A strong poem!Loved it

  • KittyK on May 24, 2011

    This is a beautiful poem and your photos are fantastic!

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