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Melting Ice

Lady Sunshine on Nov 6, 2011
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A winter trifle.

Snowflakes fluttering

Delighted gasps uttering

Lovers melting ice

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  • Melody SJAL on Nov 6, 2011

    That’s pretty interesting.

  • mdrkarim7 on Nov 6, 2011

    Thanks for sharing.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 6, 2011

    So well described.

  • Vivek Ratan on Nov 6, 2011

    Beautiful poem,LS

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 6, 2011

    Good imagery.

  • Val Mills on Nov 6, 2011

    What a wonderful haiku, the picture is perfect.

  • Shirley Shuler on Nov 6, 2011

    Hi Lady Sunshine, in so few words, you say so much. I can imagine the melting ice as two lovers kiss.

  • Boyka on Nov 6, 2011

    I Like It

  • Lynn Hollis on Nov 6, 2011

    Skillfully written.

  • djbtol on Nov 6, 2011

    You can have the snowflakes. I want to be there for the delighted gasps!

  • Starpisces on Nov 8, 2011

    you are a romantic poet, another nice haiku with great pic.

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