Limerick.

Men – I feel your Pain

You work so hard, Monday to Friday – I feel your Pain.

With all the stress, you still manage to keep Sane.

Loved ones help you spend the Money

after all, they are your family.

You know what they say: “No Pain, No Gain”  :)

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  • ImKarn23 on Jan 27, 2012

    Awwwww..poor guy(s)..lol..If there is a god – i know he invented Man to provide..
    Uhhuh..

  • PHILLY DREAMER on Jan 27, 2012

    Funny. That does it they’re all cut off. LOL

  • Razorwind on Jan 27, 2012

    For some, my dad never bought me anything.

  • lovinglyoursjuny on Jan 27, 2012

    Exactly :p

  • Dragoonk on Jan 27, 2012

    Funny lil poem :P

  • sheilanewton on Jan 27, 2012

    No pain no gain is RIGHT!! That’s life!!

  • Martin Kloess on Jan 27, 2012

    I am a soft touch

  • icciev on Jan 27, 2012

    Waw, amazing and funny. Glad to find people like you whom understand our pain!

  • Eunike on Jan 27, 2012

    Most of us is in this kind of trap

  • papaleng on Jan 28, 2012

    cute one,and the message is shared loud and clear.. Kudos to all men who give them all just to provide their family’s needs.

  • prospectboy on Jan 28, 2012

    I agree with Razorwind. My father never done much for me either. Nice and funny poem. Thanks for sharing Elena.

  • Stable on Jan 28, 2012

    Ha ha, loved this Elena.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Jan 30, 2012

    Big up the women too ;-)

  • vladimire popovski on Jan 31, 2012

    great work! keep it up!

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 13, 2012

    So funny. I don’t remember having things like that paid for by my dad when I was a child. If we wanted something we saved up our pocket moneywhich we were given after we had done our chores.

  • Safa on Apr 21, 2012

    So funny..Enjoyed it very much
    Well done!

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