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Men with Swords

Lady Sunshine on May 2, 2011
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I love a man who knows how to wield a sword. ;)

What is it about a man with his sword?

Gleaming in the light

Held poised and steady

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Ready to strike

His muscles flexing

As you shiver 

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With a look in his eyes

That holds you captive

And pierces your soul

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Sending chills down your spine

Causing you surrender

And tremble with delight

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  • ceegirl on May 2, 2011

    great share

  • galore on May 2, 2011

    nice and furious

  • Tiki33 on May 2, 2011

    Nice post! Thanks for the share!

  • CHIPMUNK on May 3, 2011

    great images and well written piece

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on May 3, 2011

    Very well written.

  • Christine Ramsay on May 3, 2011

    I loved this post. It is very appealing.

  • Starpisces on May 3, 2011

    sounds really charming and can kill many ladies, make them tremble with delight, may kneel down to surrender, and then at his disposal, let him decide what’s next…. (I’m exaggerating..)
    great poem.

  • Adam Henry Sears on May 3, 2011

    Hi LadyS, do you actually know men with real swords? I’ve never owned a real sword, but I have carved them from wood as a teenager, so I did learn a little bit about how to use one. Of course, I prefer to use a staff as they are easier to wield.

    Anyway, seeing that I am a guy, I can’t really comment on your piece here except to say that I have always preferred women weilding swords. ;) lol… have a nice day.

  • Erin Miller on May 5, 2011

    Great piece here! Love the pics too.

  • Shirley Shuler on May 8, 2011

    Hi Lady Sunshine, you express it very well, there is something about men with swords. Love the pictures, they are very appealing to the eye :) .

  • DemonDogZack on May 11, 2011

    Ninjas vs. samurai vs. tekken wannabe? Lol I can’t wait to make my own video games. Insert evil laughter.

  • Coleen Hazeldine on May 16, 2011

    Very intriguing. You should do one with women with swords. ;)

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