Couldn’t thing of anything to write so I wrote about that.

Mental Block!

 

Unrelenting criticism

A blank page

Crude apposition at hand

Concrete concerns

Bedeviled mind

Time ticks away!

 

Fresh air, away

Argumentative criticism

Clarity to mind

No blank pages.

No concerns.

Humanity at hand.

 

Sestina’s hostile steel hand

Won’t let me away.

Belittling concerns

Clutch criticism

Grass resembling page

Distraught mind.

 

Dizziness of mind

Paper needed at hand

Destination page

To aviate away

Doubting criticism

And concerns.

 

To capture concerns

And extricate my mind

Of criticism

With apposition at hand

Pen marks away

A once empty page

 

Clean cutting the pages

Blankness, coils with concerns

And moves them away.

Liberated mind.

Collective marks at hand

I face criticism.

 

Dyed pages cut open my mind

Concerns flood with moving hand

And drag tormenting criticism along.

 

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