Its a poem about a sailor who is crying to the mermaids to save him and his crew from drowning.

Sailing thru situations
Overwhelmed in pain
Concealing all emotions
I masked a brighter face
But when all efforts went vain
i found myself losing all grace
I stood and I stared
The anger in the skies
And the rage of the seas..
they were drowning away
The cries of my crew
What can they do..
But believe ..
maybe
This is how it should be..
But yet they prayed..

Mermaids of the sea
Don’t u see me..
I’m now sinking.
Come save me now
Find me a shore
To live in..

I’m steering thru the mighty waves
Clutching a hope so tight
But to see another day
I got to battle this bitter night
But I know I’ll never.
But yet i prayed..
i prayed this way..

Mermaids of the sea
Don’t u see me..
I’m now sinking
Come save me now
Find me a shore
To Live in..

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Comments (5)
  • Aaron on Mar 8, 2009

    dis one seems incomplete too….

  • Denise Kawaii on Mar 8, 2009

    I like it. It reminds me very much of my friends in the Navy while they are at sea and feeling lost in the midst of an endless ocean. Thank you for sharing!

  • Athlyn Green on Mar 9, 2009

    Interesting subject matter.

  • Mermush on Mar 20, 2009

    niceee…like d way he calls out for mermaids…is dat all dey do..save the sailors from sinkin lol….well den im doin d right job!!

  • Lostash on Jun 1, 2009

    Love this one!

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