Mesmerized

Phoenix Montoya on Oct 23, 2010

Under the lover’s moon.

The sweet smell of the grass,

and the still light of the moon.

Perfect moment for us.

Our special time alone.

Under the starlit sky,

we taste each other’s lips.

How I melt in your embrace,

as the world remains asleep.

You whisper a secret,

dark and sinister, I hear.

Yet, your voice some music,

enigmatic to resist.

Thus, screams shatter the night,

foul, unspeakable curses.

As hooded men invade,

I hold on to your clutches.

Lover’s night into fight,

I yell, I weep and you claw

Alas, rivals have triumphed,

everything turns into black.

My heart bleeds as I wake,

finding no presence of you.

Murderous men have calmed,

beneath their feet – a demon!

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Comments (20)

Anj M on Oct 23, 2010
Nice
Kaye TM on Oct 23, 2010
lovely poem. =p
awesome11 on Oct 23, 2010
great share! thanks!
My World on Oct 23, 2010
Thanks for share.
PSingh1990 on Oct 23, 2010
Nice Share.
Ubel Ein on Oct 23, 2010
WoW, Phoenix… This is GREAT!
Tulan on Oct 23, 2010
dark and deep,
giftarist on Oct 23, 2010
What a cool piece, friend.
CA Johnson on Oct 23, 2010
Your poem was really beautiful. I enjoyed it a lot.
CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 24, 2010
Lovely poem. Unique and beautifully written.
Likha on Oct 24, 2010
You really have some creative imagination kabayan. Proud you’re Pinoy.
papaleng on Oct 24, 2010
Ah! I was out of words. Mesmerize talaga ako.
1hopefulman on Oct 24, 2010
While the poem is well written, I can’t say I really like the ending.
BC Doan on Oct 25, 2010
Oh, the freedom to express, and you express it well, very well Phoenix!
Allison Jae on Oct 27, 2010
Wow! This was great. I was hooked from beginning to end.
Phill Senters on Oct 27, 2010
Dark indeed…Spooky.
johnnydod on Oct 27, 2010
Beautiful poetry
AFHodge on Oct 27, 2010
Jeepers! Gave me poignant goose – bumps!! Indeed Dark! Outside of the castle…..Brilliant post!!
Sincerely,
Angela faith
yes me on Oct 30, 2010
Nice one Montoya cheers
J M Lennox on Nov 11, 2010
Wow – wonderful poem. The words didn’t need the picture, but it certainly was perfect for this piece also.

Hi there!