A poem about a recent project I started.

I wrote the words
With loving care
Signed my name
Placed to share
Rolled the paper
Made it thin
Uncorked the bottle
And slipped it in
I sealed it up
Closed and tight
Then threw it in
With all my might
It made a splash
But began to float
Drifting away
Carrying my note
I stood and watched
It bob from sight
Disappearing
Into the twilight
Then returning home
A few days later
On the table
There lay a letter
A fishing family
Had found my note
Upon the river
They seen it afloat
Being so kind
They wrote a reply
Grateful were we
My cousin and I
For we had sent our hopes
Along with that bottle
That the message be found
On its watery wattle
It had traveled south
To City Island
Where the family found it
And pulled it to dry land
So for our project
The first part now complete
We’ll wait and see who
Bottle #2 will meet.

(Note: I would like to send out a special thank you to Rosa, Harry, and their children. They are the family that found our message and sent us the special letter!)

(Also: To anyone reading this, please keep a look out for my future article about our Message In A Bottle Project. I will explain about the project farther and will include photos and possibly videos! All the people who respond to our bottle messages will also be formally thanked!)
I will post that article sometime in the future when we hopefully have a few responses!

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  • bestone on Jun 5, 2010

    very nice message shared

  • V rank on Jun 5, 2010

    Very artistic.. Liked its simplicity.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jun 5, 2010

    A very good idea, and the poem left me panting!

  • rajaryanme on Jun 5, 2010

    You penned this one very well.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jun 5, 2010

    u have gr8888888888888 imagination yalonda

    its wonderful to associate with u

    and ur lovely

    as unique poetry God bless

  • VTech on Jun 5, 2010

    Good Post.

  • Domenico Cigliano on Jun 6, 2010

    Nicely done and interesting project.. I was always fascinated as a child about sending messages in a bottle.. the unknown as to whether it will be found and by whom.

  • Nosa on Jun 7, 2010

    Interesting indeed,I hope the next bottle comes to me-Naaaah! Just kidding-no chance! I really like this poem,it’s almost like watching a movie-i could visualise it.
    Thanx for sharing.

  • sara20 on Jun 7, 2010

    Excellent manner and very well-written sentence is doing, with useful information includes a good things you have in your article.

    Thanks and cheers.
    Sara

  • Precious Illusions on Jun 20, 2010

    beautiful as ever yalonda…

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