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Meteor Shower

Teves on Nov 7, 2009
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Meteor Shower Expected November 17, 2009.

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I saw the meteor shower!
I swear.
Just now,
Just there!

It’s our habit of seeing connections

that makes the meteor shower

look like a constellation shattering,

when in fact these particles of matter

are debris, not shooting stars

but defunct comet dust on fire.

We, of course, are more than frozen gases,

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  • AlmaG on Nov 7, 2009

    Star light, star bright,
    makes Teves’ wish come true tonight!
    ^_^

  • Hansika on Nov 7, 2009

    nice one

  • mathurans on Nov 7, 2009

    Good one..

  • Maxthevir on Nov 7, 2009

    November 17th? Are you sure? That’s one week after my friend’s b’day and 10 days before my other friend’s…also a day before Diamondpoet’s b’day! o.O

  • ReggieLutz on Nov 7, 2009

    why am I suddenly thinking about methane? ;-)

  • Themax on Nov 7, 2009

    The wonderful stars and Teves both are beautiful :)

  • Patrick Regoniel on Nov 7, 2009

    So succint. Nice one. :-)

  • Starpisces on Nov 7, 2009

    well written..

  • lillyrose on Nov 8, 2009

    nice one!

  • deep blue on Nov 8, 2009

    Wonderful rhymes.

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 28, 2009

    nicely written poem…

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