A warning to mice everywhere.

There are mice in the house.

There are mice near and far.

But the latest news is perplexing;

about a mouse in my sisters car.

*

I’m not quite sure how I feel,

although I did for a moment, smile.

Should I fell sorry for the mouse,

or console my sister, awhile?

*

It would be rather daunting,

not knowing what it will do.

It could run across your foot,

or the car wires, decide to chew.

There is a trap neatly placed

underneath the front seat.

Place your fingers there

and pain you’ll surely greet.

*

The car door is now left open

in the hope it will escape.

But determined, it stays within;

its fate, it will not abate.

Perhaps it was a worthy quest,

to enjoy the thrill of a ride.

Although an unwelcome passenger

destined to continually hide.

*

So although I see no happy end

for this mouse in its car home;

let it be a warning

for mice everywhere, that roam.

.

© Copyright J M Lennox. All Rights Reserved.

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  • Larry Fish on Feb 12, 2011

    I loved it, so amusing. It reminded me of the time I was driving and a mouse went up my pant leg.

  • Ima Vee on Feb 12, 2011

    this one is very well composed JM… nice one…

  • vijayanths on Feb 12, 2011

    Interesting poem

  • Adrn0919 on Feb 12, 2011

    I love this poem. I am sorry your sister has a mouse in the car. I had a hamster try to get loose in the car one time but that is another story. Charming, amusing, and well written. Thank you.

  • Val Mills on Feb 12, 2011

    Mice find amazing places to surprise us! In the car is a problem, possible accident ahead!

  • Ukrainian on Feb 12, 2011

    Poor mouse – it’ll eventually get into trap. :-(

  • Raj the Tora on Feb 12, 2011

    very cute poem indeed. Thanks.

  • AskSan on Feb 12, 2011

    I will never ride in your sister’s car. Not that the opportunity may ever arise but I’m just sayin’. Otherwise, cute poem :) :) :)

  • CHIPMUNK on Feb 12, 2011

    good one liked it funny

  • J M Lennox on Feb 12, 2011

    Thanks everyone. Larry, that must have been very unnerving while driving. I’m glad to see it didn’t cause an accident – or did it? Either way – I’m very glad you are now ok. AskSan – no problem there, I completely understand. :-)

  • Baijayanti Pradhan on Feb 12, 2011

    very cute.

  • Starpisces on Feb 12, 2011

    Love this poem, awesome
    Most people are afraid of mice, and mice very afraid of us too.

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 13, 2011

    A wonderful poem. Next to moths, I can’t bear mice. I would never set foot in that car with a mouse in it.

    Christine

  • Sharif Ishnin on Feb 13, 2011

    I hope the mouse leaves the car or else it would be it’s last ride pretty soon. Very cute poem.

  • yes me on Feb 14, 2011

    Liked this one very much Jan cheers

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