Title: Winter Air (One Shot)
Subtitle:Feel the breeze of the cold air, holding the hand of the one you love. Genre: Drama, Romance
Rating: 13+ (T) Contents are not suitable for children.
Character/s: Sakura and Shauran
Disclaimer: Characters are merely borrowed and the author is not intended to offend anyone. Everything written here is Just a FiCTiON !! A/N: Normal letters are in presen time. Italic letters are the past/memory. If this fiction touches your heart, please comment! =) And one more, I don’t do summaries at ONE SHOT STORiES.

CHAPTER ONE: FiNAL

“Shauran, do we go to the same school?” She ask me innocently.

“Yes, we do.” I answered softly.

We’ve been walking around since 4pm. I can’t start a conversation. She will ask something and an answer will come out to my mouth, then I’m speechless again. She doesn’t remember anything, not even the teddy bear I gave her last two years. She always carries it where ever she goes… Until now. Her face is fainting and I can’t do anything about it.

We’ve come this far, cause I know from the moment I saw her, she’s the one I will marry, the one I will live with… Forever.

That happened five years ago…

I was going home that night sitting inside a full load bus when suddenly, a girl sit on my lap. I was shocked a little, she was facing back at me. I felt nervous that moment.

“Aaahm..” A low voice came to my mouth. I thought she doesn’t heard me, so I intented to poke her. But before my hand reached he shoulder, she turned a bit and I saw a slight view of her face. I froze that moment, looking at a cute girl, sitting on my lap without any permission and I didn’t even know her. She’s eating a chocolate bar and she even had a chocolate around her mouth. She’s the most cutest girl I’ve ever seen in my life.

I heared the bus stopped and in just a second, passengers who are standing started to unload. The girl too started to move towards me to dodge, and I thought that moment, she really thinks that I’m actually a chair. I laugh silently. My nervousness fades out. The bus started to run again, minutes later, on that moment, I really can’t move my eyes off her. She looked at me and I sought her with her shining eyes and an innocent face I’ve never seen before. I was captivated, and assumed that her age was not far from mine. My heart started to beat faster, faster than I ever knew. I became too conscious that she maybe hearing this beat so I move my face, but I can’t change the fact that she’s still sitting on my lap.

“Excuse me!” A man said entering the bus. But when he passed to us, he accidentally thrust the girl on my lap and pushed her towards me.

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  • chazzief on Apr 17, 2011

    uhm, i don’t really understand the storyline but there are some parts that i like, for example “We’ve come this far, cause I know from the moment I saw her, she’s the one I will marry, the one I will live with… Forever.” While reading, I thought that these words is like lyrics of a song and towards the end you said so. keep it up ^^

  • JiiroNews on Apr 17, 2011

    =D believe it or not chazz.. it came to my own words .. the song is just for the mood .. the song is sad and it inspired me to write .. I really don’t know the lyrics of that .. =D lol .. about the story .. it’s separated in two parts .. the past(where they first met..) and the present time where the last day of the girl take place .. =D

  • dasnin on Apr 18, 2011

    watta nice ! XD i understand what u really intend to ask . more story ( short !! ) to come ha , iwant to read it !! hopefully , i want you to write as long as u can ‘coz im wanted to read a story that has divided into chapter , like novel anyway .. and iLyk the name u used !!!!!!!!! both anime character that i reallllllllllyyyyyyyyyyy love ,, haha so keep it up XD

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