Midnight Walk

haikumad on Dec 28, 2009

Tags: branches, trees, walk, Wood

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Traditional 5/7/5 haiku.

Midnight walk in wood

Lower head to miss branches

The scratch of the twigs

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Comments (10)

Pаtsy Collins on Dec 28, 2009
Sounds as though you’re creeping through the undergrowth – wonder what you’re up to?
jaysonv on Dec 28, 2009
great post.. thanks for sharing!
Christine Ramsay on Dec 28, 2009
You create wonderful imagery through this haiku. Well done.

Christine
mkd1788 on Dec 28, 2009
nicely expressed..good one
Glynis Smy on Dec 28, 2009
I enjoyed this one, very visual.
thuanynguyen on Dec 28, 2009
love the pictures.
Frances Lawrence on Dec 28, 2009
those few words really created a feeling of walking through the woods. I loved the pictures.
standingproud on Dec 29, 2009
Yes my brain is filled with thoughts of you getting up to no good,lol.
loved it
simple but very effective
Francois Hagnere on Dec 29, 2009
Very nice pictures to illustrate your good work. Thank you.
albert1jemi on Dec 29, 2009
beautiful words

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