Mild Breeze Makes High Cool!

N V Subbaraman on Oct 29, 2010

In short verses five, merits of strength and success presented.

Small pin- a strong tool

To the strong and mighty man

Mild breeze makes high cool!

Strong is not the strong

Confronted by the stronger

The wise do no wrong!

Genuine success

Results from one’s character

As light from sun rays!

Face challenges bold

Nature faces man’s onslought

It knows no failure!

Success brings further

Go on with earnest efforts

Great spiders inspire!

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Comments (4)

strategy03 on Oct 29, 2010
Great writing. I like this
Natarajan Kalpattu Narasimhan on Oct 29, 2010
Nice meaningful poetry!
VASUDEVAN on Oct 29, 2010
Nicely brings out the fact that pen is mightier than the sword or some thing to that effect.
Gargi Saha on Nov 2, 2010
A very meaningful verse.

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