This poem is an inspiration from R.Frost. I had just put my thoughts.

MILES TO GO

 

MILES TO GO

Miles to go before I SLEEP,

Sails I want to make a LEAP,

My path is full of rambles and STEEP,

Rails I need to make it STREAK,

Memories and thoughts are what I KEEP,

But, sorrow is the one that I REAP,

My mood often goes too NEAP?

The reasons are so hard PEEP,

Murmurs in heart, no words to SPEAK.

Dr.P.Elayaraja

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Comments (6)
  • Divix on Nov 13, 2009

    Good Try. Beautiful words.

  • aunslaught on Nov 21, 2009

    I agree with Divix

  • dragon on Nov 22, 2009

    Very good.

  • dgraphicrookie on Nov 26, 2009

    this one is very nice

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 20, 2009

    Oh you remined me of the original. How wonderful

  • Raj the Tora on Nov 2, 2010

    excellent wordings and nice verbatim – good rhyming and nice timing

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