The inspiration for this piece came from reading a piece done by James De Vere. As I was writing a comment, I remembered a ghostly encounter I had while traveling. Perhaps only in my mind, but when I was in my motel room I saw my love one, praying by the bed.

Time at home so meager,
Time together, so elated.
Effort to return, so eager,
Travel nerves so grated.

Above the clouds once more,
To a city never been before.
People never see again,
Graciousness, all pretend?

Lost amongst new surrounds,
Familiarity, none found.
Wishing, thinking, home in mind,
Wishing, thinking, he was mine.

He is not, cannot replace,
That which I see the face.
Face in my mind, face in my thoughts,
Stranger I see, stays in vacant lot.

Mine is miles away, miles away.
Mine is with me, here to stay.
Distance not enough to divide,
Distance goes like the tide.

Alone I go to empty room,
Empty room I would assume.
Assume is vulgar, shouldn’t be,
Who could be there, maybe he?

There by my bed he kneels and prays,
We look at each other, eye to eye.
Not a word spoken, nothing to say,
For in an instant he left, goodbye.

You see, he is here.
Where ever I stay.
In my mind, all so clear,
Hearts united, we cannot stray.

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Comments (11)
  • Geri OHara on Dec 28, 2008

    Very moving

  • Melissa Cook on Dec 28, 2008

    This is very sweet, and very moving. glad you shared this! Keep it up! :)

  • Debra. on Dec 28, 2008

    That is a little creepy but I think we’ve all had an encounter close to this. Could it be a message or a warning of some kind?

    Well done,Clay.It will certainly peak ones curiosity.

  • james on Dec 29, 2008

    if i could have you

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Dec 29, 2008

    expect the unexpected so they say,very lovely and romantic,i enjoyed this a lot,happy new year

  • goodselfme on Dec 29, 2008

    I read this twice enjoying it so well both times. A very well penned piece.

  • ecrivan on Dec 30, 2008

    Nice to see your writing Clay, keep it up:)

  • Darren Goad on Jan 2, 2009

    Definitely eerie… nice work

  • AmandaMarie on Jan 5, 2009

    Very nice, very nice!

  • Mr Ghaz on Jan 8, 2009

    Very good poem. Well Done!

  • rutherfranc on Jan 22, 2009

    a deep one for me..

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