….

someone pass me the remote control

turn me over

make this show your own

for today…

i feel you more than ever

but i was never really alone

i can vision the tingle upon my own kiss

as you mime the screen

like an endless, enduring wish

in silent conversations

bound to my skin

alternating eyes as sharp

but as lost as a pin

i mimic your every move

into the dissociation you are taking me

trying for reason, to sooth

different voice, but the same words

it all comes across negative

even absurd

i allow you effortlessly to take over my mind

and leave it all

leave my other life behind

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  • pattiann on Oct 27, 2010

    Great poem.

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 27, 2010

    A very descriptive and well written poem.

    Christine

  • Kaye TM on Oct 27, 2010

    beautifully written!

  • Noeal V on Oct 28, 2010

    Nice Share.

  • TommyP on Nov 3, 2010

    Humbled once again!! Nice piece MqD!

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