A mind can be weak, stay strong.

People mind telling them to do things without thinking

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The mind say it’s alright go ahead, I will lead you

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It may be wrong, but it’s up to you how far you take the leap

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The mind control you overall

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The mind can be very weak

You have to stay strong to over power the mind

The mind can be like a peak, you will never be at the top.

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  • Will Gray on Dec 14, 2009

    So very true!!

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 14, 2009

    The mind or brain hasn’t been used to it’s full potenial, because if it had humans may have colonized another planet by now. Good post.

  • Grace Kathryn on Dec 14, 2009

    If you can keep your mind healthy, it can be a fascinating place.

  • LovelyWolf on Dec 14, 2009

    Though your mind in truth does control everything, it is your body or emotions that would make you do different. But all in all this was a great poem, thanks for sharing!

  • Judy Kaelin on Dec 14, 2009

    Interesting

  • LoveDoctor on Dec 14, 2009

    Yes, this is so very true. And when we are confident and take that leap then you have the haters trying to bring you down. You must stay strong! Good message. I enjoyed this one very much.

  • Moses Ingram on Dec 14, 2009

    Thanks for the reminder. Let’s all keep our minds healthy.

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 14, 2009

    Interesting poem.

  • T. S. Lewis on Dec 14, 2009

    My battle buddy when I was a Drill Sergeant at FT Knox was Canibus Drill Sergeant. Great write brought back memories.

  • Stan Wilson on Dec 14, 2009

    The heart is treacherous who can know it,the mind has the conscience to decipher right and wrong….a very good poem here..hehe gets one thinking huh……..

  • Atanacio on Dec 14, 2009

    very true and a clever entry Ceegirl :)

  • ken bultman on Dec 14, 2009

    If you don’t mind, it doesn’t matter. Keep your mind out of the gutter.

  • 8Shei8 on Dec 14, 2009

    Mind and will-power! Good one!

  • willie wondka on Dec 14, 2009

    interesting thoughts.

  • diamondpoet on Dec 14, 2009

    I agree sometime the mind can take control, but you have to put it back in place.

  • vishali on Dec 14, 2009

    interesting poem, i like the pics !

  • ReggieLutz on Dec 14, 2009

    thanks for the share

  • Olive B. on Dec 14, 2009

    Good poem…I agree! ;)

  • vb545323 on Dec 14, 2009

    Interesting, Thanks For Sharing!

  • BluSphere on Dec 14, 2009

    I agree with you !
    Very nice poem

    Thanks for sharing this..

    Best regards,

    Anders W Hegelund

  • AlmaG on Dec 14, 2009

    That is very true ceegirl! Great poem :)

  • livemike on Dec 14, 2009

    Oh that good old mind!Would’nt our lives be so boring without this struggle!!

  • Ebedeley on Dec 14, 2009

    That is true! I like the pictures.

  • Kelly Melang on Dec 14, 2009

    Always keep the mind fine tuned, too much flab up there could be dangerous for your health!

  • Westbrook on Dec 14, 2009

    It\’s not so much the mind that is a problem. It\’s what you put in it or allow in it that may become a problem or an asset.

  • Ramalingam on Dec 14, 2009

    When the mind is right tuned and becomes strong, it is the power house.

  • Will Dee on Dec 14, 2009

    I love the graphics and message.

  • Eunice Tan on Dec 14, 2009

    It is true

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Dec 15, 2009

    The mind can be a battlefield if we don`t take control over it.

  • papaleng on Dec 15, 2009

    Interesting message shared, but I’m wondering, should we tame our heart first, because our emotions have a big impact on our mind.

  • milspouse05 on Dec 15, 2009

    Nice view. I liked it

  • Snooky on Dec 15, 2009

    Right on

  • Emma Green on Dec 15, 2009

    Interesting piece and great use of imagery

  • cutedrishti8 on Dec 15, 2009

    Interesting poem..

  • Param Arora on Dec 15, 2009

    Excellent Poem

  • standingproud on Dec 16, 2009

    I enjoyed this.
    interesting
    thank you.

  • aniket on Dec 18, 2009

    great pics in this poem

  • Dame Barbara on Dec 20, 2009

    I really liked this, and awesome pictures!!!

  • ladydryle on Dec 24, 2009

    what u put into ur mind will affect on what will probably happen…great post…

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