This poem is related to the mind wandering. I try to explain my condition in this poem.

My hobbies are not manageable,

Because at present I am not capable,

My mind wandering in the areas that are not feasible,

But in time the mind is runnable,

Mind activities are traceable,

I think about these when I am sitting front of a table,

We have the guts to stop our mind because we are capable,

Stop your mind from going to the wrong sides because it is changeable,

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  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 2, 2010

    good post, and welcome to triond.

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Jun 2, 2010

    Nice one. Keep writing.

  • Goodselfme on Jun 2, 2010

    Great thoughts and I fully agree. Thank you.

  • Intuitive on Jun 2, 2010

    well written. welcome to triond.
    Also thanks for your comment on my post
    http://socyberty.com/society/a-bright-day-in-rock-and-roll-ozzy-osbourne-not-dead-at-61/

  • aly king on Jun 2, 2010

    nice poem!!!

  • patofgold23 on Jun 2, 2010

    nice entry here…a good way to start on triond!

  • qquezadababy on Jun 2, 2010

    Thank you friend.

  • Meg Smith on Jun 2, 2010

    Interesting poem…Welcome to Triond…

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 2, 2010

    A good start for your first post here. Keep it up! :-)

  • Uma Shankari on Jun 3, 2010

    A good one… liked it.

  • SubtleHints on Jun 3, 2010

    thanks for sharing this! ^_^ and welcome to triond! ^_^

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Jun 3, 2010

    Bravo!!! what a great start in your first entry….welcome to Triond.

  • TwiKnight on Jun 3, 2010

    Great write, mate… Keep up the good work and welcome to triond!!

  • cardy on Jun 3, 2010

    What a great write welcome to triond hope to see more of you work this is good thanks for the share.

  • Atanacio on Jun 3, 2010

    a very good and different write Loved it

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Jun 3, 2010

    Welcome to triond.com, hope you find it as enjoyable as I have.
    Your poem is awesome and very deep, since the mind is capable of almost anything.
    Fantastic

  • XXElleXX on Jun 3, 2010

    :-)

  • Milton H Peebles III on Jun 3, 2010

    Interesting perspective
    Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

  • stryka66 on Jun 3, 2010

    Great start – & welcome

  • jupiter2010 on Jun 3, 2010

    this is the nice post

  • yes me on Jun 3, 2010

    Welcome to Triond and yes I liked it? making your mind up ? there for I am? cheers

  • carissimi on Jun 3, 2010

    You say a lot with little words… nice skills.. :)

  • Sharif Ishnin on Jun 3, 2010

    Welcome to Triond stranger. Very nice entry Keep it up.:).

  • giftarist on Jun 3, 2010

    Well penned piece, my new friend.

  • V rank on Jun 3, 2010

    very simple yet very interesting work of art…

  • Phill Senters on Jun 3, 2010

    Interesting take you have on how your mind works.

  • banosorio on Jun 3, 2010

    nice poem! :)

  • suhail on Jun 4, 2010

    well that gave me some positive vibes … i really cant control my mind have been feeding its will for so long that it has become the owner here :S

  • agrant10 on Jun 4, 2010

    Hi Stranger 007,
    Nice to meet you. This is a nice poem and the picture really makes it interesting.

    I was feeling kind of down this am and I clicked on your poem and I noticed that there are 2 of my ebooks and one of my mp3’s downloads listed on your page. I guess these are ads. It brought a smile to my face, Keep on writing.

  • amanda casey on Jun 4, 2010

    I love it. You write great poetry. Uses great descriptions so clear I felt like the person in this poem. :)

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Jun 4, 2010

    Interesting thought.

  • scheng1 on Jun 6, 2010

    “Mind activities are traceable” except when I need to find my cell phone!

  • MJ Sunderland on Jun 7, 2010

    Excellent work. I think I feel this too.

  • John Stone on Jun 7, 2010

    Nice…I probably would have made her clothing a bit darker though. My eyes think it is too bright.
    Otherwise, nice words and ideas.

  • nayabingi on Jul 20, 2010

    excellent

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