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Mired in Clay

MrZebra84 on Apr 1, 2009
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A short, not-so-cheerful piece.

Where have you landed?

When did you depart?

And why are you always

Lost before you start?

Where have your thoughts gone?

And what did you say?

Why are you so lonely

And mired in clay?

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Comments (8)
  • Jeffrey B. Merrow on Apr 1, 2009

    awsome

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 2, 2009

    A haunting piece. I loved it.

    Christine

  • papaleng on Apr 2, 2009

    short but provoking.

  • kate smedley on Apr 2, 2009

    I like the imagery in this

  • clay hurtubise on Apr 2, 2009

    You wrote a piece about me! How sweet! :)
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Betty Carew on Apr 2, 2009

    Excellent poem MrZ good job

  • Darla Cooke on Apr 2, 2009

    A very interesting poem. I like it.

  • monica55 on Apr 2, 2009

    Very creative imagery. I love it.
    Monica.

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