This is how I feel when all is silent and my mind begins to wander.

Please tear me apart from the misery,

Take me away from it all or away from myself,

Comfort me with a liquid blanket and take the tears away,

Peel back my eternity from this dreadful shell of a life,

Help me forget for at least a moment, or forever if you so desire,

This shallow world I will leave behind in the wake of my mediocre existence,

A single blast to vacate the mind that holds memories soaked in dissapointment

The last drop of life hits the floor,

The silence sets in and the last breath exhales,

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  • diamondpoet on Nov 3, 2009

    That was very intense, and painful. I enjoyed it.

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