Missing Your Presence

daintylad on Mar 12, 2010

-I haven’t seen to him lately. But in this day, we talked a little and that gave a wonderful delight. Enjoy!

I’ve been missing you lately,

Been wanting to feel your presence so badly

And I hardly tried to wait

And the chances are too scanty

To my great surprise,

You gave a private message unknowingly.

And my thin dsiguise

Is to pretend I’m not searching so hasty.

My harsh words seem to be success

But I undeniably can’t supress

The belongingness to your comments

That made us continue to our undaunted requests.

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Comments (16)

Literatour on Mar 12, 2010
Embolden private messages.
indu on Mar 12, 2010
wonderful
Darla Cooke on Mar 12, 2010
Very good poem.
diamondpoet on Mar 12, 2010
Great piece, and well written. thanks
giftarist on Mar 12, 2010
Nice!
EK Encarnacion on Mar 12, 2010
yes, the feeling of eagerly waiting for a love one… definitely well-expressed in the poem. *claps*
standingproud on Mar 14, 2010
very sweet, it is nice to miss a little bit.
LOVELYHONEY on Mar 15, 2010
OUT OF ALL THE MISSING POEMS IVE READ THIS IS THE BEST GR888888888888888888
8Shei8 on Mar 16, 2010
This is wonderful. I am missing someone too. Hoping that person will call me =)
fragile18 on Mar 17, 2010
nice ate lani
T. S. GARP on Mar 17, 2010
Wonderfully expressed!
Steven West on Mar 17, 2010
Very nicely expressed.
rizzei on Mar 21, 2010
lovely..and lalim..d k mareach hehe^^
nylahz on Apr 3, 2010
wow, you’re good.. i never knew you were this GOOD.. keep it up lani.. astig..

if you two (whoever he is) end up together, remember to introduce me… hehehe..
Emma Green on Apr 23, 2010
Nicely doen, straight to the point. Good work!
yes me on Jul 16, 2010
Lovely words cheers

Hi there!