A young poet new triondy one writes mistakenly.

My most favourite picture

 

Mistakenly taken

 

If you are taken

Be not mistaken

The love will forever

Reside in you

How so ever you wish

He will be taken

Along with you

 

So have no qualms

Please do awake

Ere I die

Let me once awake

With you

Our love partakes.

 

You say you are taken

You are really mistaken

Do you know?

What taken means

It’s glorious

That you still don’t know

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Comments (8)
  • Darla Cooke on Oct 30, 2009

    Interesting poem.

  • Judi Eddy on Oct 30, 2009

    Good Poem

  • Sourav on Oct 30, 2009

    Nice

  • Teves on Oct 30, 2009

    Well done…

  • cardy on Oct 30, 2009

    A deep write from you liked it a lot

  • Diverseblogger on Oct 30, 2009

    Well done

  • Aiyanna on Oct 30, 2009

    Nice Work :) very interesting!!!

  • wonder on Oct 31, 2009

    A deep one.

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