The land of my dream.

Tis’ a land where wild stallions reign

where emptiness lures you to explore its beauty

the infinite expanse looks so serene

but everything exists in its subtlety.

Where the smell of freedom intoxicates your breath

when it spreads its aroma on the lush green plains

the enormous landscape will drown you with its depth

and in your heart its visions will remain.

Where sacred lakes cast their spell

and invisibly bestow their blessings with serenity

“come bathe in bliss”,they silently tell

and proudly make Mongolia a land of beauty.

Image via Wikipedia

3
Liked it
Comments (5)
  • cutedrishti8 on Sep 3, 2009

    Nice one to share..Great work…..

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 3, 2009

    That is a stunning description of mongolia. Great work.

    Christine

  • Fegger on Sep 3, 2009

    That was simply beautiful!

  • monica55 on Sep 5, 2009

    Your nostalgic description of Mongolia is very intense. It creates many more dreamed up imagery for your readers. Excellent work.
    Monica.

  • Radhika Bhargava on Sep 5, 2009

    Its a nice and beautiful description…..Good Work

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading