Myth surrounding a giant stone atop an ancient funeral mound.

Giant rock, a great monolith
Sits atop of yonder mound
Subject of an ancient myth
Known near and far around

Dragged there we are told
By people wracked with fear
In a most distant time of old
Ere did modern man appear

The mound is still older yet
Dirt piled on a royal tomb
A monument, lest one forget
To violate brings instant doom

Legends tell of robbers bold
Broke into its sacred room
In search of silver and of gold
Immense fortune to assume

Through pit dug from above
They descended into gloom
To their graves symbolic of
Their souls it would consume

Those who had stayed at top
Heard most piteous screams
Which then suddenly did stop
As flames from pit did stream

They ran in panic to the town
Sought protection in a crowd
But fires brought each down
Wrapped each in firey shroud

Brave men succumbed to fear
Waiting quaking till the dawn
To them a deadly new frontier
What other evil might it spawn

Decision then the town did make
Slaves shackled in their chains
At spear point they would take
To where new evil god now reigns

Make sacrifice best they could
Pay penance for the robbing few
Whatever price for common good
Whatever promise need renew

But at the summit all they found
A gaping pit burned white by fire
Purified by flame this burial ground
Purified in its own funeral pyre

New decision quick was made
The pit would be filled with stone
Poured from top in great cascade
Sealing in that evil yet unknown

And when that task was done
They did a thing creative of a myth
Cover with a stone not to be undone
A giant stone, that greatest monolith

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Comments (11)
  • cutedrishti8 on Dec 2, 2009

    Great poem..Very well written

  • Pithom on Dec 2, 2009

    Ayers Rock was firmly in my mind whilst reading it. Great mythology, and very nicely done. I imagine this would sound great recited over a campfire.

    But being as my brain works in a strange sort of way… I couldn’t help but think of it as representing some kind of truth of human behaviour, and saw the monolith as an object in the mind that obscures a truth that is not welcomed, or not wished to be known; the mound and its sacred room at the beginning representing the mind.

    A very interesting write.

    Thanks.

  • abhishek40914 on Dec 2, 2009

    very nice poem! I like your writing style

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 2, 2009

    That is a great poem. You do tell the story well.

    Christine

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Dec 2, 2009

    good poem and story..fine composed!

  • AlmaG on Dec 2, 2009

    That’s a wonderful story!

  • Sukhdarshan on Dec 2, 2009

    I like the way it is written…you are very artistic in your writings..thanks for sharing..

  • neet on Dec 2, 2009

    Very Interesting.

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 2, 2009

    Excellent poem!

  • diamondpoet on Dec 2, 2009

    This was well written, and I like the flow. Do I need to envision Sir Lance A Lot.

  • Snooky on Dec 3, 2009

    I am waiting for the book, ok

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