A haiku/senryu about the ruler of the night sky.

piercing the darkness
glimmering moonlit waters
Luna rules the night

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  • Michele Cameron Drew on Nov 14, 2008

    You are really enjoying working with these power-packed little pieces, and I’m really enjoying reading them. Very nice! :)

  • Aardaerimus on Nov 15, 2008

    lol! I can\’t help it, Michele. It\’s all I have time for… Or perhaps I\’m merely too lazy to write a full poem. heheh

    Still, I really do enjoy writing haiku/senryu.

    I greatly appreciate your comments and encouragement. I think it\’s your kindness that\’s really the catalyst to my creativity.

    Again, thank you. :-)

  • Michele Cameron Drew on Nov 15, 2008

    No thanks necessary… they are beautiful! Keep them coming and perhaps you’ll find the inspiration for something more lengthy. I find some of my best work comes from some of the most unusual inspiration.

    :)

  • Teyah on Dec 27, 2008

    This one is great.

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