The moon sees all…

The moon floated

in silent whisper

watching the earth

as it felt the sun,

hazing,

blazing,

around it,

the moon wanted to leave space,

it was ashamed of the Human Race,

it wanted to hurl itself

into the cold depths of space,

it felt the disgrace.

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Comments (7)
  • Rinks Desai on Nov 18, 2009

    wow….nice..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Hansika on Nov 18, 2009

    excellant…

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 18, 2009

    I don’t blame the moon…

  • Sourav on Nov 18, 2009

    Very well written. Love the flow this poem!

  • Aleena on Nov 18, 2009

    Great article! very well writen

  • Sammy2000 on Nov 19, 2009

    quick but well done

  • sandie on Nov 20, 2009

    love the way you have written this like the moon is alive.

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