A poem I wrote during a peaceful night this past summer.

Moonlight so pale
Silvery beams of light
Shine down upon us
On this glistening night

Shimmering stars
Twinkling from afar
Light up the sky
Knowing where we are

Reflecting on the water
Swaying and dancing
We see all the beauty
Without ever glancing.

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  • Mickey Pig Knuckles on Jan 28, 2010

    Awwwwww Yalonda, what a beautiful picture you have painted with your words of choice. Being a moon child this one is especially nice. Some glance and always enjoy the beauty of nature and all she has to offer. Thank You for sharing your creative gift of writing with us all and for giving us a part of yourself. Excellent poem…

    Mickey Pig Knuckles

  • Precious Illusions on Jan 28, 2010

    I just love the way you take up some simpler and beautiful things in life and paint them in your words…

  • cassandra evangelista on Jan 28, 2010

    Such imagery I am instantly drawn into your poem. I wish I was there right now just looking at the gorgeous moon with awe :)

  • pattiann on Jan 28, 2010

    Very good poem! I could imagine myself being there with the moonlight.

  • Jenilia12 on Jan 28, 2010

    very inspiring words…

  • cardy on Jan 29, 2010

    A lovely write I love the moon!

  • Midie on Jan 30, 2010

    What a wonderful view.

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