Bright moonlight casts the shadows of young lovers.

Moonlight casts our shadows on the wall
Reflected light, reflected from my lover’s eyes
A subtle light that contains so little color
But we need no color, for we are lovers

My fingers do see the color of her hair
My lips taste the redness of her lips
Her skin the finest parchment in its tint
My love for her the color of a rainbow

In moon cast shadows we see our actions
My hands now have come to cup her face
Our lips approach, the distance ever shorter
In touch of lips we see a shudder in our forms

Now the shadow shows her blouse removed
Her breasts soft curves are most delightful
Her firm nipples reaching out toward eager lips
My hands moved from face to find new treasure

We stand naked now in this warm moonlight
We care no longer for our shadows movements
Those are not the real thing
Real is what we find in our lover’s arms

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  • BRUCE KELLY McCURDY on Nov 22, 2009

    The poetic descriptives are good,yet the content is too common. Not truly unique,yet, in many ways a good work.

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 23, 2009

    a good sensual piece… fine composed.. good work!!

  • Snooky on Nov 23, 2009

    x rated, but good

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 23, 2009

    Very sensual and romantic!

  • diamondpoet on Nov 23, 2009

    That was so passionate.

  • Pithom on Nov 23, 2009

    That was crafted very nicely… sensual. I liked the idea of sensing colours with other parts of the body (there’s a typo in the second stanza, third line: I think you mean ‘Her’).

  • Phantom Beauty on Nov 24, 2009

    Hey salaam copied me despite writing it before me. That i liked how you said you dont need light, just white moonlight, because you can feel the colors through her lips, etc. And I like the last line in that paragraph that says your love is like a rainbow, bc that means all her body parts have been felt by you.

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