Comments on: Moonlight Shadows

By: Phantom Beauty

Phantom Beauty — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 20:00:54 +0000

Hey salaam copied me despite writing it before me. That i liked how you said you dont need light, just white moonlight, because you can feel the colors through her lips, etc. And I like the last line in that paragraph that says your love is like a rainbow, bc that means all her body parts have been felt by you.

By: salaam

salaam — Mon, 23 Nov 2009 18:39:54 +0000

That was crafted very nicely… sensual. I liked the idea of sensing colours with other parts of the body (there’s a typo in the second stanza, third line: I think you mean ‘Her’).

By: diamondpoet

diamondpoet — Mon, 23 Nov 2009 16:30:35 +0000

That was so passionate.

By: Darla Smith

Darla Smith — Mon, 23 Nov 2009 13:13:03 +0000

Very sensual and romantic!

By: Snooky

Snooky — Mon, 23 Nov 2009 06:42:54 +0000

x rated, but good

By: Priyanka Bhowmick

Priyanka Bhowmick — Mon, 23 Nov 2009 04:03:29 +0000

a good sensual piece… fine composed.. good work!!

By: BRUCE KELLY McCURDY

BRUCE KELLY McCURDY — Mon, 23 Nov 2009 03:25:22 +0000

The poetic descriptives are good,yet the content is too common. Not truly unique,yet, in many ways a good work.