Unapproved love.

It was the best of times,
It was the worst of times.
I know that sounds cliché
But those seem to be the only words
To describe the present day.

How could something so corrupt
As bitterness and hate
Spring from something so pure as love
Poured out from heaven’s gate?

I wonder which path I would have chosen
If I knew what lay ahead.
Would I be brave enough to love
Or run away instead?

I try to voice the pain inside
In search of some release.
But failure greets me every time,
Robbing me of peace.

But when I look into your eyes
And see all the love that’s there
I know I must give us a chance
After all, it’s only fair.

Each person has the right to choose
The path that they will take.
And there are no guarantees in life
To assure your heart won’t break.

So despite of disapproving eyes
And warm hearts now turned cold.
I’ll stand in faith believing in
The promises foretold.

For when my Father speaks to me
I know each word rings true
And when He said “more than a season”
Perhaps He spoke of you.

I thought it was a place I’d be
Perhaps somewhere I would stay.
But it seems to be the path I took
And I found you along the way.

So although I feel a little lost
And can’t quite understand.
I’ll stake my peace in knowing that
I’m in my Father’s hand.

And in His hand is where I’ll stay
Now and forever more.
And I’ll rejoice in what I have
And in what He has in store.

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  • kim waite on Feb 12, 2009

    very moving piece,i love it i think you have an exceptional talent.I enjoy reading everything you write.

  • hfj on Feb 12, 2009

    Beautiful peom and story. You can always count on finding peace and contentment in the lords great hands. Love your work, and another great poem to add to your already impressive collection. Well done.

  • lindalulu on Feb 12, 2009

    Wonderful write and beautifully expressed.

  • Joie Schmidt on Feb 12, 2009

    Such a lovely, honest poem*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • stephencardiff on Feb 12, 2009

    good expressions, nice job jo, impressive stuff……

  • Karen Gross on Feb 12, 2009

    Very deep and emotional.

  • Debra. on Feb 12, 2009

    A very moving and beautiful piece! I really enjoyed it, Jo!

  • C LEBLANC on Feb 12, 2009

    good work. Hope things get better.

  • papaleng on Feb 12, 2009

    heartfelt and an honest poem, a joy to read.

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 13, 2009

    I am so with you on this Jo. Beautifully written and touching poem.

  • S A JOHNSON on Feb 13, 2009

    Very beautiful

  • Aldrin A Wilding West on Feb 13, 2009

    Loved this Jo, there is nothing here I don\’t understand and the rhythm and rhyme are very good. I\’ll be back to look at some more of your work soon.

    Aldrin :)

  • OhSugar on Feb 13, 2009

    I love it. This is truly beautiful and emotional. Nicely done.

  • Gail Nobles on May 23, 2009

    Great Poem!

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