Morning Chills

Phoenix Montoya on Oct 11, 2011

Imagining the bright side of things.

No wicked weather or cold air, not a clue,

for the world baths in rays of warmth.

The heaven, a peaceful hue of white and blue,

as beautiful songs fill the earth.

No ghastly someone to hold, or break us down.

The spirits of men have gone kind,

for only love remains, hauteur has been blown,

enclosed in a brotherhood’s bind.

No ill fortune, black cats or wretched curses,

for wizards and witches have left.

Our destiny lays safe from any forces,

yet, our choices exposed for theft.

Freezing or warm morning has been made perfect,

each dawn, a fresh and flawless start.

Ugly trials of yesterday, morning wreck,

hence, frost is only in the heart.

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gaby7 on Oct 11, 2011
Great share here! it is chilly here today as well!
lapasan on Oct 11, 2011
Beautiful poem. I like it.
Sunjhini on Oct 11, 2011
loved the imagery. beautifully described
CHAN LEE PENG on Oct 11, 2011
Beautifully expressed! You made it again!
mtrguanlao on Oct 11, 2011
Another great poem sis!
Melody SJAL on Oct 11, 2011
Very nice words…musical.
yes me on Oct 11, 2011
Subtleness comes to mind cheers Phoenix
papaleng on Oct 11, 2011
wow! simply beautiful. kilig ako.
dwisuka on Oct 11, 2011
nice
beingwell on Oct 11, 2011
I love the photo very much.
The Bling on Oct 12, 2011
Inspiring. How do I write a poem like that?
FX777222999 on Oct 15, 2011
Imagery to the max, great!
Likha on Oct 21, 2011
You are indeed in your best element in poetry. Lovely work Phoenix.
samsons1 on Oct 21, 2011
beautiful read, beautiful use of words…
megamatt09 on Oct 21, 2011
Put some wonderful imagery forward.
mdrkarim7 on Oct 22, 2011
Nicely written.
SharifaMcFarlane on Oct 23, 2011
Love the last line.
beingwell on Nov 5, 2011
Very nice, friend! Plus I love the photo.
ittech on Nov 6, 2011
very nice
scheng1 on Nov 6, 2011
Better sleep in this kind of weather.
krrymarie on Nov 10, 2011
Lovely poem and photo.
ittech on Nov 17, 2011
Ugly trials of yesterday, morning wreck,

hence, frost is only in the heart.

beauty ful
Mahendra on Dec 17, 2011
Beautiful poem. Liked it.
Deepa on Dec 17, 2011
Wow, Greatly written. Very cute poem,

Hi there!