Inspiration from a single autumn leaf impaled on a strand of barbed wire.

Picture by Casie Hines used with permission

Tender bud springs forth in full wonder of life,
Awakened by the warm smile of the rising sun;
Bathed in the purity of morning dew drops
And stirred in anticipation of the fresh new dawn.

Green days of youth unfold their arms,
Stretched out like a fully masted sail.
Exhilarated by their flight in the wind, they
Remain secure in timber ties to rooted strength.

Passing time paints in shades of autumn’s hue,
As shorter days exhale their frosted breath.
Temporal stems of obligation relax their grip
,Allowing winds of change to bring new flight.

Course of current carries loft towards winter rest,
Riding waves of latent dreams cresting in rebirth.
Life’s autumn leaf leaps with eyes on trusted goal
Unaware of pending halt in reckoned charted course.

Failing flesh of foliage late ends its forward motion
Caught on piercing rusty barb of mortal’s fated twine.

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  • ken bultman on Jan 29, 2010

    First the cradle rocks, then the hearse rolls. Very creative analogy.

  • I Have Had Enough on Jan 31, 2010

    This made me think of quiet autumn days when the wind drives heavy at your back, and the streets are barren but for the sound of dry leaves scuttling along the ground. Great imagery, Katie, you took a single picture and gave it a story of its own.

  • Roberta J. Morrison on Jan 31, 2010

    I love your imagery…so beautiful.

  • STEVE666 on Feb 1, 2010

    Beautiful poem, Katie. I’ve said it before but I’ll say it again, you are a great poet!

  • rutherfranc on Feb 3, 2010

    a piece filled with melancholy.. tugs at your heartstrings at the end..

  • L.S. Farnsworth on Feb 5, 2010

    That is awesome piece of writing.

  • miraj on Feb 12, 2010

    This is excellent ma’am,you are such a keen observer,I really am spellbound as to how carried the poem.Great piece of work
    with lot of things to consider.

    my deepest respect and gratitude,Ma’am
    LOVE IS ALL

    Walk in beauty,change the world.

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