Mother

ceegirl on Nov 9, 2009

Tags: always right, glow all times, Growing Old, mother, mother important to me, Save Me, stays strong, things she gave me, world to me

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The most important person in my life.

M is for the things she gave me

O means she’s growing old

T is for the tears she shed to save me

H is for her heart that stays strong

E is for her eyes which glow all the times

R means she’ll always be right

Put them together they spell MOTHER

A word that means the world to me.

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Comments (42)

lillyrose on Nov 9, 2009
any mother would be so proud of a daughter that wrote things like that!
Emma Green on Nov 9, 2009
Nice write.
svishnugopal on Nov 9, 2009
wonderful ceegirl…i love my mother though she doesn’t talk to me now…i love her a lot..
Themax on Nov 9, 2009
My mother is god for me, she turns my life into Life!!
Great poem ceegirl
Petalm on Nov 9, 2009
Very touching.
serowa on Nov 9, 2009
Beautiful and a nice way to honor your mother. Mine passed on when I was a kid so treasure yours while you can!
livemike on Nov 9, 2009
A beautiful tribute to your mother…She sounds like an amazing women…
Jenny Heart on Nov 9, 2009
Just perfect!
Will Gray on Nov 9, 2009
Wonderful acrostic tribute!
Agnes Chin on Nov 9, 2009
clicked Like it. Very well composed.
Lisa Mae Parsons on Nov 9, 2009
How precious, I’m sure that touched your mother’s heart!! It did mine. Some of the most beautiful writings I have read were about the people that mean the most to us!! How much more special than to express them in your own words.
Teves on Nov 9, 2009
Very interesting…
Ramalingam on Nov 9, 2009
Mother is an epitome of sacrifice.No one can deny it.What you have compiled is quite nice and describes the real character of a mother.Thanks for sharing.
ssaunders on Nov 9, 2009
This is a touching mother poem. I think it would be a great mother’s day card
girlnextdoor on Nov 9, 2009
Sweet words and depth of emotion with sicerity and affection is palpable…
Eunice Tan on Nov 10, 2009
Your mother will appreciate it. God bless you.
Jamie Myles on Nov 10, 2009
lovely!!
Papa Sparks on Nov 10, 2009
Ditto all the kind comments that have already been posted here. Any mother would be proud to have their daughter write something like this.
Sharif Ishnin on Nov 10, 2009
Peace and blessings to you for this beautiful poem.
Christine Ramsay on Nov 10, 2009
That is so beautiful. Your mother sounds wonderful.

Christine
Hansika on Nov 10, 2009
wonderful
Mr Ghaz on Nov 10, 2009
Fantastic and beautiful poem ..nice words too..I loved it..thanks ny friend
diamondpoet on Nov 10, 2009
That was very nice we should all cherish our mothers.
Starpisces on Nov 10, 2009
So sweet! Keep writing
Darla Cooke on Nov 10, 2009
Lovely poem!
papaleng on Nov 10, 2009
Beautiful and a very sincere tribute!
galindo on Nov 10, 2009
This is very sweet.
Will Dee on Nov 10, 2009
A special write for all mothers. Thanks for sharing.
bobbyt on Nov 10, 2009
Very nice poem, love it.
SharifaMcFarlane on Nov 10, 2009
Great mothers and fathers-their legacy lasts forever!
uberdude on Nov 11, 2009
Very touching…
butterflysects on Nov 12, 2009
indeed, mothers are the best..:)
very nice!
Atanacio on Nov 13, 2009
Love your stuff
Raja on Nov 14, 2009
Very nice poem. I liked it.
Chantell on Nov 14, 2009
I really do miss my Mother. Appreciate Yours
loualbert on Nov 16, 2009
This is a good piece of poetry, and very thoughtful and loving way to speak of your mother.

In this poem you put a few things together: diction, emotion, love, care.

You did good with this superb work!
Kelly Melang on Nov 16, 2009
So sweet! Great poem for Mom’s and children alike!
abhishek40914 on Nov 17, 2009
i am so touched, great writing style, keep it up, check my articles too
Liz Sapphire on Nov 25, 2009
Very sentimental to me, since my mother passed away a few years ago. Beautiful, thanks for sharing.
Grace Kathryn on Nov 25, 2009
You’re so lucky to have a mother like that!
CutestPrincess on Nov 29, 2009
she’ll surely proud of you…
meandu on Nov 30, 2009
Glad I found this poem today. It seemed like it was talking about my mother. Thanks for sharing.

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