This just a poem to express my feelings to my mother who passed away 12 years ago.

Mother.. i’m nothing without you..
You gave me life, and you gave me hope..
Even you’re not belong in this world anymore…
I’m sure that you still watching me somwhere…

I really miss to hold your hands..
I really miss to hold you tight…
I really miss your affection…
I really miss your smile and laugh…

I want you look at me now…
12 years ago you left me while i was still a teen..
Now i’m a proud father…
Mother i want you to meet my daughter…

She really looks like you…
She’s beautiful.. she’s your grand daughter..
Oh dear mama… i really miss your love…
Oh dear mama… your the kindest person that i ever knew..

I feel blessed if you’re still with me today..
Please forgive me if i made you cry…
Can you hear me there mama?
Do you know how much i miss you??

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  • girishpuri on Oct 27, 2011

    very emotional , touchy

  • pattiann on Oct 27, 2011

    That was beautiful! I understand how you miss your mother. I miss Daddy as he died last year in August 19, 2010. He was my absolute best friend. Lucky my doctor gave me anxiety medicine because my sister still cannot say his name without crying. My mom couldnot cry or she would never stop. I was and am medicated. I had the anxiety medicine from February to August and we were not expecting him to die so I guess I was lucky suffering from so much anxiety.

  • Aldy Varius on Oct 27, 2011

    pattiann. thanks… my mother passed away 12 years ago… but until now i still miss her so much…

    girishpuri : Thank you so much

  • FX777222999 on Oct 27, 2011

    Really touching lines that can move mountains..your mother.

  • Aldy Varius on Oct 27, 2011

    FX777222999 : yes… my mother is my biggest inspiration until now… i’m really proud of her

  • reiny on Oct 27, 2011

    nice poem, mother is one special in our life

  • ittech on Oct 28, 2011

    nice poem thanks

  • Dehan Nathaniel on Oct 28, 2011

    Very emotional and touching. It\’s hard when you loose someone you truly love.

  • Joie Schmidt on Oct 28, 2011

    I’m so sorry for your loss…

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • dazzlejazz on Oct 29, 2011

    This is really, really beautiful.
    She will always be in your heart and it’s wonderful that you can see her in your gorgeous daughter’s eyes.

  • Aldy Varius on Oct 29, 2011

    Thanks everyone…

  • Angelji on Nov 4, 2011

    Touching piece…

  • Adrn0919 on Nov 7, 2011

    Congratulations on your daughter. This is truly a beautiful poem and having lost my mother to death in 93 I understand you lost. thank you for sharing.

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