A mother eagle feeds her children.

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Flying high in the sky,

is that a mouse,

I see with my eagle eye.

 

I flap my out stretched wings once.

 

No time to take in the view,

the only thing I see is that tasty morsel coming closer in my view.

 

The ground is coming up as I swoop down this will be the death of you.

 

The ground is coming up fast as I go in for the kill,

my sharp talons grab you with great skill.

 

You never heard me coming as I devour you it’s a powerful will.

 

The hunter and it’s prey this is my second kill today,

not many of you get away.

 

It’s save to say my children will survive as I take home half my prize.

 

Soon I will teach them my hunting ways.

 

I take my prize and watch my children look at me with there little eagle eye’s.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Teves on Nov 13, 2009

    Good stuff. Keep up the good work.

  • Papa Sparks on Nov 13, 2009

    Really like the way you put the words together in this poem.

  • Lee Ness on Nov 13, 2009

    Very neat to word this one. Subtle but to the point. I love Eagle too. Very nice poem. Keep upo lovely work
    Lee Ness

  • lillyrose on Nov 13, 2009

    Great poem, I loved the visual. x

  • Darla Smith on Nov 13, 2009

    Wonderful poem!

  • K.Reshma on Nov 13, 2009

    Loved it

  • Olivia Van Logum on Nov 13, 2009

    Brilliant poem – beautiful photo of the eagle.. poor little mouse! Nature can be cruel…

  • Ananious on Nov 13, 2009

    loved it, great work!

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 13, 2009

    A delightful read. I can visiualise the picture so well from your words.

    Christine

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 13, 2009

    Great piece of work

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 13, 2009

    The perspective from a mother eagle…another creative piece, cardy!

  • Goodselfme on Nov 13, 2009

    Very well done.

  • Themax on Nov 13, 2009

    that’s really awesome poem cardy,Thanks for sharing :)

  • Annashank on Nov 14, 2009

    You can see a picture created in what you wrote….
    It is beautiful :)

  • shanthu on Nov 14, 2009

    very good stuff…

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