Poem/story about forbidden love,in not so long ago rural New Zealand,and its young history of war, peace and love.Below a beautiful mountain…





Many weeks passed by,

and no matter how she tried,

she couldn’t forget her experience,

didn’t know whether to laugh or cry…..

She had explained to her mother,

about an old hut where she spent the night,

and a strange man like no other,

and how he treated her right…..

But something was troubling her,

couldn’t understand what it was,

the ugly old man had caused a stir,

she just felt at loss…..

Decided to confide in her mother,

in whom she felt comfortable and fine,

hoped her mum would uncover,

what was troubling her mind…..

About the valley she asked,

who did it belong too,

wanted to know its past,

and what her mother knew…..

Her mother didn’t know very much,

only that it was native land,

returned to the tribe as such,

after being in the crowns hands…..

Its history was bloody and sad,

during the early colonial days,

the fighting between two foes was bad,

but the British forces got their ways…..

The British were a mixed army,

including Dutch Irish and a harsh Russian Major,

had heavy artillery and well armed,

even had Maori’s fighting their own……

They slaughtered all the men,

and as they laid dying they’d chant and scream,

beat the children and raped the women,

it was not a pretty scene…..

Then they left the women and children,

in the cold snow to die,

its amazing how some survived,

maybe they all pray to the same God in heaven…..

Both women went silent,

deep in their own thoughts,

Maria could understand the resentment,

that the old man may have thought…..

Then her mother spoke again,

its said the tears of the children and women,

were tears of joy and pain,

for they flowed with the tears of the mountain……

And where the fighting took place,

the blood of one another,

washed into the mountain’s flowing stream,

and the stream flowed in one color…..

the valley has been known for years,

as te tangi o te whenua,

the crying of the land,

we call it today the valley of tears…..

Then she related Maria,

that their family never ventured there,

out of respect for the brown man,

and certainly not a place for a white woman…..

Its said when the mountain blows its steeple,

the winds roars through the valley below,

the mountain is wailing for his people,

its not a place to go……………………….to be continued…………………

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  • amandeep13 on Feb 7, 2010

    Great Work

    Well Done

  • albert1jemi on Feb 7, 2010

    Great share

  • Stan Wilson on Feb 7, 2010

    thank you very much……Just got a terrible typing error in the poem the word New Zealand shouldnt be in there….\’maybe they all prayed to the same God in heaven\’ kool thank you….

  • ganeshgolha on Feb 7, 2010

    Great one! Its interesting.. keep it up. N thanks for the post,also go tru the one which I recently posted.. Thanks!!!

  • seema1962 on Feb 7, 2010

    nice piece of poem

  • joyhyena29 on Feb 7, 2010

    great post^^

  • AlmaG on Feb 7, 2010

    A wonderful chapter. Really worth reading.

  • sambhafusia on Feb 8, 2010

    excellent post..

  • sambhafusia on Feb 8, 2010

    well written

  • 8Shei8 on Feb 8, 2010

    Ahhh…the man made an impact on her!

  • Kris Tagre on Feb 10, 2010

    wars are so sad.. (”,)

  • Cynthia Cox on Feb 14, 2010

    A revelation of beauty in pain in the story I have read thus far, war is death without mercy, fear becomes the consequences of war’s end, but the beauty is found from one person’s ability to tear walls down. A wonderful story of humanity unfolding my friend. Beautiful indeed. Thank you so much for sharing your art.

  • Marie Antoinette on Feb 17, 2010

    Nice how you weaved some history in the poem.

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