Poem/story about forbidden love.between two different cultures…

Several weeks had passed by,

Maria had been feeling sick in the morning’s,

she was about to meet kong in the sky.

took no notice of her sickness warnings…..

Were about to climb the mountain high,

Kong had climbed it many times before,

would watch Maria with a close eye,

was a an experienced guide to the fore…..

They met at the agreed spot,

both embraced and kissed like teens,

weather was sunny nice and hot,

not a cloud could be seen…..

Kong told Maria they must pray,

to thank his God for this day,

asked they both be made strong,

and to forgive them for their wrongs…..

He always did this before he’d climb,

they walked steadily and strong,

leaving the valleys far behind,

even stopped to sing their favorite song…..

Reaching one of the alpine huts,

ate some lunch of fruits and nuts,

drank a lot of fluids in,

she couldn’t help wanting to kiss him…..

The climb now became more steeper,

as they got higher and higher,

she was starting to feel the pain,

couldn’t believe she was now on the mountain……

After all those years of looking,

she was almost to the top,

Kong kept encouraging her on,

she just didn’t want to stop…..

By late afternoon they made it,

She was utterly exhausted and delighted,

pretending to be knocking on heaven’s door,

but it was only a wishful chore…..

Looked up at Kong with deep admiration,

you’ve helped me to conquer my mountains,

there can be no greater elation,

what else is there to attain…..

She felt so happy and alive,

her eyes were radiating with love,

with Kong she kept doing hi fives,

this had to be a blessing from above…..

She saw it was true,

everything below did look small,

some things couldn’t be seen,

and yet God from higher see’s all…..

He counts the hair on your head,

hear’s your prayers through all the sound’s,

reads your heart when your in bed,

feel’s you pain before your tear’s hits the ground…..

Then kong spoke some words to her,

words she would never forget,

the mountain never lost his love,

he only lost his mountain of gold……….to be continued…………

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Comments (13)
  • johnnydod on Mar 1, 2010

    Blimey Stan three in one go ..another good chapter

  • Muhammad Sohaib Roomi on Mar 1, 2010

    Nice Poem

  • Michael Eboh on Mar 1, 2010

    Well meaningful post. I long to read the next chapter.

  • Jenny Heart on Mar 1, 2010

    Want to read the next one soon friend. Well written!

  • Darla Cooke on Mar 1, 2010

    I really enjoy reading your poems. They are excellent!

  • 8Shei8 on Mar 1, 2010

    eagerly anticipating for the continuation :)

  • albert1jemi on Mar 2, 2010

    great one…

  • XXElleXX on Mar 2, 2010

    Kia ora Stan Wilson :-) Nō Horowhenua ahau … like your prose Stan and I can’t wait to read the previous chapters :-)
    Noho ora mai rā, nā Elle.

  • papaleng on Mar 2, 2010

    each chapter brings new twists to a very interesting story.

  • Stan Wilson on Mar 2, 2010

    Kia ora ra e taku hoa,pehana koe….kei te pai ana hau Thank you my friend for your comments and yes that would be the way to go is read the poem/story right from chapter one,then you will get the full gist of the story….thank you …..choice…..me te pai to titiro tanga. ka kite ………tu meke…….

  • Temjen Imchen on Mar 2, 2010

    Great write. Keep going.

  • Marie Antoinette on Mar 2, 2010

    Another lovely and excellent chapter in this beautiful story.

  • Cynthia Cox on Mar 4, 2010

    I can not express enough how this story is truly a great emotional journey to share with our beauty and beast. I hear the poetry and compassion in his voice; I see the beauty she sees in her eyes when she looks at him; you have done a beautiful job of bringing two lands of understanding and building bridges of humanity of the sweetest form known as love in your writings, please keep sharing. I can not wait to see where they go from here, excellent job:)

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